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Title: Truth about the Engagement 10 Jun 2010 4:56 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aurora is a fool to stay with Rufus, even if he IS threatening Severus. I doubt very much that Severus would wish her to risk her life and well-being to protect him, nor do I think that he would appreciate it. If anything, I think that he would lambaste her for it. All she is doing by remaining under the thumb of Rufus is giving him permission to hurt her. She needs to tell someone what he is doing and get the hell away from him. It might not be a bad idea for her to tell Dumbledore, who certainly has the power to protect her.....

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. :) I agree with you about how Snape would react, and it shouldn't be too long before we see his reaction to all this. Thanks again.

Title: Second and Final Meeting 07 Jun 2010 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmm .. things getting a little serious here .... hopefully everything turns out well ..

    Author's Response: Well, I couldn't have everything end so soon with this story. Thanks for the review. :)
Title: Second and Final Meeting 07 Jun 2010 10:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    So Aurora was in love with Remus, not Severus? Interesting! I wonder if she will break her engagement to Rufus? It isn't fair to him to continue with the engagement if she isn't doing so for the right reasons. He deserves more.

    I'm not sure that telling Severus and Aurora what they have been up to is a good idea. There is a strong possiblity that blood might be shed if they do. I wonder what Harry will decide to do about this mess?

    Author's Response: Okay, I haven't explained this part in the story yet, but I'm going to explain it shortly. Have you ever had a moment when you're so emotional that you just think that the one person you want to be there holding you to make everything all better because you truly love him shows up because you're having a really bad day? Well, that was kind of my reasoning behind Aurora's thoughts. She thought it was Severus holding her, but it was really Remus. She does truly and wholeheartedly love Severus, though. I kind of was going for a surprise twist there since we readers would think it was Severus, only to find in the next chapter it was Remus. She's friends with Remus. Nothing more, though. I always thought of Remus as being an extremely kind individual so I thought he needed this scene.

    We will definitely see a scene between her and Rufus dealing with their engagement, though. Just so you know, I always took Rufus to be a bad guy, so he's not going to be the semi-nice guy from the books that we feel bad for in the end. In fact, every time I read any of his lines in DH (particularly his remarks to Harry about Dumbledore's will), I always felt like JKR made him a bit like Snape with how vicious he was to Harry. And Scrimgeour definitely deserves something, which we will see soon enough with that scene between them. ;)

    You're probably right. Their telling would probably shed some blood because those two Slytherins definitely aren’t going to be happy campers. We’ll just have to see what Harry decides. :) Thanks for the review.

Title: Phase 2: Complete 07 Jun 2010 10:28 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's a pity Aurora woke up from the fantasy brought on from the dance when she did. :( As I said previously about Severus, if she wants him she needs to go for it. I wonder what will change in their relationship now that they danced and shared a second kiss? What will Rufus do if he finds out?

    Author's Response: There's a reason why Aurora's not going after him, which I will give soon. Excellent question about Scrimgeour. You should get that answered soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Title: Setting the Stage 07 Jun 2010 10:22 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that his fears of family retribution won't keep Draco from making real friends in this endeavor. He might think he needs that mask with Harry, but he's wrong. In the end, being Harry's friend will be what saves him.

    The stage is set! I hope that all will go as planned. I wonder what Fred and George are planning to do? I'm sure it will be amusing at the very least!

    By the way, you are welcome! Thanks for taking my idea for a name and running with it.

    Author's Response:

    We'll definitely be seeing more of Draco I think. After all, Draco has to save Harry from himself. :)

    I haven't explained what those two did, but I'm going to with the next updated chapter.

    Anytime. :) Thanks for the review.

Title: Daunting Years Ahead 07 Jun 2010 10:18 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    If Severus wants Aurora all he has to do is court her. He won't get anywhere if he doesn't even try. I hope that he will get caught in a situation with her at the ball. :D I wonder how Aurora will react to seeing Severus in the green robes?

    Author's Response:

    Silverstar, have I turned you into a Snape/Sinistra fan too? :)

     

    You're definitely right. He won't get anywhere just standing in the background. Good prediction about getting caught in a situation. :D Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.

Title: Kisses and Dates 07 Jun 2010 10:16 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear! -giggles- I don't know who I feel more sorry for, Severus or Aurora. They certainly have quite the spotted history between them. It's funny how they both are fighting so hard to hide their feelings for each other and failing miserably. Something needs to happen to force them to acknowledge the attraction more openly.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I'm glad I could entertain you. :) They definitely have a spotted history, which we might get to hear them talk about...maybe...I'm not sure yet if I want them arguing in a chapter yet.

    Personally, I feel bad for Aurora because Snape loves Lily so much, which is probably why he's not going for Aurora yet. But you could definitely make the case for Severus too. Thanks again. :)

Title: Phase 2: Complete 04 Jun 2010 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmm.... It was fun even though I do not quite agree with your characterization of Snape or Harry or Draco or the twins or Dumbledore or Minerva .... pretty much anyone.... but that is what fanfics are for.

    A little too soap opera-ish - her running away from a school dance after kissing him ( they are both teachers ) but well, fun!!

    Anyway, the rest of the school aren't really having to do much to set them up - they are already there.

    Author's Response:

    I'm sorry you didn't like my versions of them, but thank you for taking the time to read it, though.

    I was kind of going for the whole Cinderella aspect, but you're right. It came off like a bad soap opera. I had that silly idea of Cinderella and decided to try it here.

    They're not quite there yet, though. They're close, but not quite yet. Sinistra's still with that Auror. Plus, the rest of the school doesn't know that they're pretty close.

    Either way, thank you so much for telling me your thoughts, and thank you for reading it. :)

Title: Phase 2: Complete 04 Jun 2010 6:27 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely chapter! can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I should have it updated on Saturday, possibly tomorrow if we're lucky. :) Glad you're enjoying it.
Title: Setting the Stage 02 Jun 2010 8:22 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really enjoyed the insight you got to see regarding Draco. And complimenting hermione was really great, especially in front of Ron and Pansy. Draco's insight about Harry at the end, "he might be an asset, but he was also a very dangerous liability", showed that Draco, much more than the others, knew what was coming. Great writing.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked that chapter. I don't usually give insight to Draco because it usually ends up sounding awkward, but this chapter felt like it needed it. :)

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