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Author's Response: I'm going to try to keep it full of humor, but one of these days my lifetime supply of humor muse is unfortunately going to leave. :) I thought people would enjoy Dumbledore's disguise. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review. :)
Also, I am surprised that Snape did not take the essay personally and get mad at Harry. Author's Response: I made sure that his essay was written that badly to show that Snape was focusing more on the topic than its grammar. I'm sure the essay was rather colorful once Snape finished correcting it, though. :) I just didn't add that part in the chapter in the interest of time and space. The essay is typical of a young man Harry's age, though, at least that is what I have received from my students when I have them write essays. My thinking of why Snape's not taking it personally was that he did give Harry the topic of love potions. So in a way, it is his fault that Harry took it in a totally different way. Snape probably was also rather impressed with how detailed and throughly researched Harry's essay was. At least that's my thinking of that.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, Lia. I'm not quite sure what you're meaning with the phrase concerning Sinistra. I'm probably misreading it, but are you asking if I should keep her engaged with whom I have her with or that she should become engaged to Snape? Either way, thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. He definitely doesn't stand a chance in phase 2. :) |
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