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Title: December Snow - part 2 06 Apr 2011 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What an exciting couple of chapters! These were both great!
Title: December Snow - part 2 06 Apr 2011 4:28 pm
Reviewer: livvie (Signed) [Report This]
    omg i just read this one through!!! I love toby! everyone has remained in character and Harry's getting real family!!!! update soon! you are the bomb!!!
Title: An Ultimate Change 06 Apr 2011 4:26 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, it did look that way to me. Wish I'd known >
Title: An Ultimate Change 04 Apr 2011 11:36 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    OH I am so glad harry will learn about his mom that is one thing I notices people really do not really talk about her.
Title: An Ultimate Change 04 Apr 2011 10:34 am
Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Come on, you can't just leave it at that! Please, what is going to become more interesting? Harry and Toby are the only ones in Gryff Tower - are they going to behaave reckless? Or is Dumbledore going to do something?
    Update, Please!!!!
Title: An Ultimate Change 04 Apr 2011 6:39 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how long Harry will be able to keep Toby a 'secret'? There have been a couple of close calls already. Will Severus ever accept that Harry is most likely his son and will he tell the boy? How will Harry react to finding out? What will happen when Toby's existence is exposed and what will be discovered about his bloodlines? Could Toby be Severus' son, as well? So many questions yet to be answered....LOL. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Title: The Spreading of Suspicion 04 Apr 2011 6:09 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving this story! Toby is as cute as can be and you've really built the suspense well without making the plot move too slowly. So Snape knows something about the possibility, huh? I am curious about Toby's past and exactly how Snape came to father both boys - also if Snape knows anything about Toby at all. I like the correspondence between Snape and Harry and hope Snape doesn't find out his identity before he comes to see another side of Harry. :) Time to read the next chapter and find out where you're taking this story!
Title: An Ultimate Change 04 Apr 2011 5:35 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so sorry. It's been ages since I last reviewed. These past weeks are some chaos...

    And I'm loving how the story has progressed! Apparently, Toby has gone into the background since he became sick, but I hope not for long! That scene was really really well done. Harry was quite desperate, but helpless. But, what with everything going on, he's really awfully young to be taking on such a.. responsibilty, if I may.

    It's killing me to know what Sirius told Snape, or the Order, but I have an inkling what it's about. :) But whatever it is, I appreciate that Snape is getting to realise Harry is not who he seems to be. Lol. Can't wait for more. I wonder how Harry looks like now. That brewing scene made me shake with anticipation. ARGH. Something is bound to happen soon!!! It must, or I'll die of all the contemplation.

    Though, is Irma Pince REALLY Snape's mother? God. That is... surprising. VERY surprising.

    All in all, rather well done!! Amazing job with the suspense factor, even without any killer last line~ Oh well. Update soon, okay??

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad to read another review from you now, anyway. :) They're always very inspiring and helpful. Yes, Toby has gone into th background a bit, well up until next chapter anyway. Some people complain he's in it too much than he's in it too less, lol! Yes, Harry is too young to really be doing this, but he's always risen to the occasion, although you may begin noticing how he's cracking a little and while he's doing the best he can, he's still getting moodier and finding it more annoying at times than anything. It's worth it for him, and he's dealt with worst, so Harry just tolerates it.

    Haha, yeah I bet it is, although it won't be revealed in full just yet, getting closer with each chapter though. Harry is looking a lot like a younger, happier Severus apart from the obvious Lily traits in his appearance that are becoming more obvious as well. Yes, some things are starting to change and others will take a vert dramatic turn soon.
    Yes, Irma Pince really Eileen Prince, Snape's mother! And thank-you for your review and I loved your comments. I'll be updating again soon, yeah. Thanks!

Title: An Ultimate Change 04 Apr 2011 4:34 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh please update soon! This is getting great!
Title: An Ultimate Change 04 Apr 2011 1:48 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked it.

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