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Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 11:17 am
Reviewer: sm1982 (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautifully written.
    Nice reactions, but how come Dumbledore has to stick his nose in everyones private life? Can't wait to see where it leads.
    Keep up the great work.
    Please update soon.

    SM

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Dumbledore is involved because he senses a risk for Harry, Severus is noticable livid, and DD is aware that when he's 'this' furious that he might not react quite as reasonably as he normally would.  Especially when it comes to Harry Potter.  And the altercation is taking place on school property, between a teacher he is responsible for, and a student he is definitely responsible for.  Plus, when deciding to follow and read the letter he has no indication yet that the matter is 'private/personal'.  Hope this is a reasonable explanation for you.  DD's not just being nosy, honest... ;)

     Thanks again, glad you are enjoying!

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 11:05 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    And Dumbledore's off scheming and plotting again :)...
    I'm glad you decided to continue the story; I'm looking forward to the third part and the solving of the mystery!
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 10:40 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, Damn snape is pissed isn't he! lol more please
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 6:44 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I can understand Severus' thinking that it might be a prank, but anyone can definitely tell that there is at least a possibility of Harry being his son by the way he reacted. I feel really bad for Harry; he is so terribly confused by this. I hope that the truth will be discovered soon.
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 6:25 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I think you're doing a good job interpreting the characters. I can imagine them reacting in exactly this way. Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 6:23 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was great! I eagerly await the next installment. I hope that Severus is Harry's father. However, I am sure that I will love whatever you decide to do. Shouldn't you have said "seen" instead of "sighted" in "...he hadn’t ever sighted a Marriage Certificate after all"?
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 6:07 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for continuing this! I love seeing them both learn about their relationship at the same time, practically out of the blue. Great story.
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 5:27 am
Reviewer: TATIS (Signed) [Report This]
    HAS MADE ME MOURN.
    Dumblendore defended Harry!

    amazing
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 5:27 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh this was so good. Love how Dumbledore followed Snape and made sure to be with them both during the talk. Love Harry's reaction to Snape's questions. Looking forward to the next chapter
Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011 5:08 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    oohhhh wat an awful place to stop!!! i hv to tell u that u must update soon or u will hv a revolt on ur hands b/c im sure im not the only reader that's disappointed that it ended there! i do sincerely hope that it's more than 3 chapters im sure that ur story is really popular and pple will want to read more and more :) i can say that im one of the pple nyways i really hope that u update soon b/c im dying to no wat happens nxt!!

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