| Title: Something bothering you, Mr. Snape?
| 03 Nov 2013 3:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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*drawls* Haha, yes, Sev, it is a bit harder being a father to two, now isn't it?
I love your story! Please keep up the lovely writing!
| Title: Something bothering you, Mr. Snape?
| 03 Nov 2013 3:03 pm
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| Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed)
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Great chapter. Wish it had been a bit longer and included Ian and snapes talk. Glad to see Ian finally growing up. I would really love to see Ian confess to getting Harry in trouble in the corridor that night. Snape needs to see that himself and Ian and Malfoy are more bully's like James than Harry ever was or ever will be.
Boy, Sev certianly put his foot in it this time, didn't he? And he hasn't a clue as to why or how. Ian is NOT a happy camper and it didn't have any direct connection to Harry this time!
I could almost feel sorry for Sev.
Thanks for the update.
V.
| Title: Something bothering you, Mr. Snape?
| 03 Nov 2013 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: C (Anonymous)
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Progressing nicely, I like the change point of view and it is nice to branch out a little from the original book.
| Title: Something bothering you, Mr. Snape?
| 03 Nov 2013 1:16 pm
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| Reviewer: bere (Anonymous)
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i really love this story. this chapter was great even if harry wasn't there
| Title: Something bothering you, Mr. Snape?
| 03 Nov 2013 12:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous)
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Another amazing chapter, I like it very much!
| Title: Something bothering you, Mr. Snape?
| 03 Nov 2013 12:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Snapy (Signed)
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please update soon, another great chapter
I bet it was Ian or Snape who gave him the cards... Ian probably. Hurry and write more. I want to see more Harry and Snape :) I wish there would be less of the original books and more of your own story here.
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