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Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 7:23 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow this was a good chapter! Loved the way you described Harry's anger, well written :) and the last few lines were wonderful too, short but it carried a lot of meaning. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter, i like angst haha. Please upload soon!
    Also, if you haven't read Family Night or In Care Of, I really suggest that you do. Major feels in those though!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and the ending. I just read In Care Of, by your suggestion, and I was hooked! Thanks for leading me to an awesome story.
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 5:22 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really cannot blame Harry for his distrust of Dumbledore. The man made an enormous mistake when he failed to keep tabs on him. I do hope that he will realize soon that Dumbledore doesn't actually have any intention of separating him from Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, Dumbles really screw up with Harry. He is sorry though; I really don't like evil Dumbledore who puts Harry with the Dursleys to toughen him up. My Dumbledore really didn't intend for all that horror to happen to Harry.
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 5:21 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks so much for writing this. Best fic I have read in a long time!!
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 4:34 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Mmm

    estoy como Harry confundida con Dumbledore, entiendo que él no quiso causar daño a Harry de manera intencional pero sus acciones le dieron dolor y Harry es un niño, no se le puede pedir que comprenda y acepte que él es solamente daño colateral

    además de que siendo sinceros Albus es un manipulador

    en fin............

    buen capítulo
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 4:03 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Good Harry and Snape stories. That should open the floodgates. On this site kbinz's two stories are favorites and I like most the Snapegirl's work. As to this chapter, I wonder if Harry's opinion of Dumbledore will change? At least Harry has developed a measure of trust towards Snape. Sounds like there is a long way to go though. Harry seems to nearly prefer Voldemort to Dumbledore at this point.

    Author's Response:

    Thanka for the review! Yeah, I love kbinz's stories as well, they're great. I'll have to check out Snapegirl's work, I may have read one or two of her stories. Thanks for the suggestion!

    About Harry, he will eventuallly learn that Dumbledore's does not intend to hurt him, but will he ever trust him? He really does hate Dumbledore more than Voldemort, because Dumbledore, to him, is a concrete danger who's direct actions caused him great harm, while Voldemort is just a concept.

Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 3:51 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thanks you!
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 3:48 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Quote from chapter: "I hate Dumbledore. I hate him worse than the Dursleys. I hate him more than Jade’s stepdad. I hate him more than… no, I hate that guy more. But still, Dumbledore comes close. When I know more magic, he’ll never know what hit him."
    Is it wrong for me to say That a kid after that comment from Harry :P

    As for Harry & Snape stories. Healer Pomfrey Has a ton that I think all are in my favorites (on Fanfiction site) if you haven't read them I would recommend you try them out. :) Its is the same Healer Pomfrey on here but as you will see she only has 2 on here. A lot of the stories have of course Pomfrey in them but also McGonagll.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! If I understood you correctly, it's true; Harry really has seen too much to be a child. There's a lot of anger there.  And thanks for the suggestions :).

Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 3:00 am
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it.

    Here's one of my favs that just finished
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5926514/1/Perception-is-Everything
    By Kendra James

    Author's Response: Thansks for reviewing. I had started that fic a while back and stopped because certain aspects of it got on my nerves, (I thought their relationships developed unrealistically quickly) but when you suggested it I ignored the things I didn't like, and I'm really enjoying it. :)
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 2:52 am
Reviewer: thegirlwhodreamed (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I cant wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you! You won't have too long of a wait :)
Title: Chess Master 11 Jun 2014 2:03 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I very much appreciated your development of Harry's perception of Dumbledore. The confusion and uncertainty was very realistic. I also liked Harry's realization that he had become rather comfortable at Snape's. Have you read Blood Magic, by GatewayGirl?

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I really appreciate your feedback. I'm about halfway through Blood Magic, now, and I love it, so thanks so much for recommending it!

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