I think it's great - Ravenclaw really suits this Harry. Will Harry be able to overcome house rivalry and remain friendly with Hermione and Neville, though?
| Title: To Belong
| 16 Nov 2015 8:06 am
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| Reviewer: Tori (Anonymous)
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This is quite fantastic. :D There is definitely not enough Ravenclaw!Harry to go around. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this!
| Title: To Belong
| 14 Nov 2015 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So glad you are continuing this I love "To Trust". Can't wait to have Jade in the story again as she seemed such an interesting character.
I remember Severus saying that Harry had to see Madame Pomfrey in to trust, it might make an interesting chapter to have that visit especially
If Severus is present! Also a continuation of Harry's dislike of Dumbledore but that is because I dislike him!
| Title: To Belong
| 12 Nov 2015 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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I was so glad, whe I'd noticed your new story. I've loved "to trust".
And this 1st chapter (or 1st one-shot)is definitely very good and I like it :)
A was hoping a little, that Hermione will be in Ravenlcaw , but still... hopefully they still be friends.
And I would like to know Severus reaction on the sorting.
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I'm so happy you are continuing this, even though I would love a sequel, but I will take what I can get!
Thank you so much for continuing this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's really great to hear.
Yay! I'm so glad you're continuing this! And I am a fan of Ravenclaw!Harry and everything! If I could suggest anything, it'd be first potions class, first time Harry gets detention, and him making friends. You could have him bond with minor characters or go for good ole Hermione. Personally, I'd rather not see Ron bashing or any romance, but that's just me.
Anyway, thanks so much for this story! You're such a great writer and "To Trust" is one of my favorite fics!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're happy with Harry's sorting. Thanks for the suggestions; I'll certainly keep them in mind.
Interesting! How does Sev react?
Author's Response: I would say he's pleased, but unsurprised with Harry's placement. Though perhaps he's a tad disappointed that Harry wasn't sorted into Slytherin. He would never let Harry know, of course.
| Title: To Belong
| 10 Nov 2015 5:24 am
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| Reviewer: Christine (Anonymous)
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I am so glad you're continuing To Trust!!! Awesome one shot, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's great to hear.
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