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Reviews For Surprising Development
Awww...I loved the descriptions of Snape's quarters...too bad Harry couldn't stay longer
I was not expecting that twist!! :D
Interesting chapter, I like the thought of the train at night with the two of them in the carriage together.
I loved the RofR ambiance and how it comforted Harry. Hermione's reaction was very in keeping with her but Ron was sweet but a bit out of character, but their support was lovely thank you.
Nicely written description of Harry still shocked over the revelation.
Poor Harry, always getting to grasping range of having a family only to have it snatched away at the last minute. Unless his relationship with Snape improves, it's going to be hard learning HE's the 'muggle' father.
Poor Harry. To have a hope of a family but unable to realise it is so sad. Thank you for updating your story Author's Response: Yes, I know. But considering how he grew up, I believe he would struggle with low self-esteem. Thank you for your review!
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