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Reviews For Surprising Development
Oh dear all his hopes and dreams dashed
Thank you an interesting chapter
A good start but please start a new line with each new person speaking Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! I appreciate your advice and will adjust the spacing accordingly.
Great going so far! I'm looking forward to seeing Snape's reaction to Harry's "detention" with the toad! Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Umbridge is indeed a nightmare. I hope you're not disappointed by the next chapter. Since I'm writing from Harry's POV, I couldn't reveal Snape's true thoughts or reactions.
Looking forward to reading more!
Ooooo...
The premise is interesting. Excited to see what happens next!
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