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Reviews For Surprising Development
Nice build up of tension on two different fronts.
Great chapter! I really like that Snape is letting them visit Draco secretly. I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
Love it!
I loved reading it! We know Snape is the father, but does Snape know she's Lily? When did he find out? Isn't that quite wrong to continue in it's own (given she didn't know?)? (Also romantic because they'd fall in love not knowing eachother). Slightest chritism, it's lovley but the logic of "hey let's talk" and becoming friends like that feels like girl-logic. Afaik boys do it a bit diffrently. But it's still a very lovley story. Also I made this account to be able to tell you that reading the story was quite nice
Very revealing about Severus's magic and how Harry could see it. Loved how Hermione bonded with Draco over the book and Ron over quidditch, very revealing. Thank you for updating
Interesting depiction of magic.
The beginning of the chapter is me, every time I get ready for work :D More seriously...the new silver leaf...and the leaves on the silver ring...coincidence or not?
Dumbledore has no clue...! ;P
Severus is changing towards Harry. Thank you for updating |
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