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Reviews For Where Once Was Light
Author's Response: Why thank you!! And I believe you're a new reviewer for me, so TEN POINTS TO YOU!! :) '
I wonder if Harry will change his name. I hope that he only changes his last name thought, or goes by his middle name, and then he can still be called Harry, because at thirteen it might be a little confusing for him to change both names.. Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry about the name too much. As I said before, it's more of a formality really. Thanks for another review!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Lily's letter was beautiful though it is so very sad that she died believing hte love of her life was dead. I had to stop reading it and get a tissue before continuing. Please keep writing and sharing this tale. I applaud and say "Bravo!" Dancingkatz Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! I know I always say this, but it really does mean a lot to me that you all like this so much! Thanks again!! PS ten points to you! :)
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Author's Response: oh wow, thanks for tell me. No, actually, I've never read that story at all. Never a big fan of slash, so I'm certain I've never read it. I feel a little bit bad though about it, but I would have it known that I was making this story up on my own. Maybe I should just announce that in the next chapter? It's just a weird coincidence I suppose, but I do feel bad about it. Thanks for the review though, and I'm glad you like it.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much! Glad you liked it!! :)
Can't wait for more Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Dancingkatz Author's Response: Why, thank you very much!! I'm glad you liked it. I always thought there had to be a reason other than just sudden hatred. Thanks for noticing! :)
And now with Petunia and Severus's understanding here that Harry cannot stay there...where will they go? THey cannot go back to Spinner's End, since it would be patrolled by Death Eaters...Hmm...CUrious to find out. Typo Alerts: "After years of being starved, especially during the more crucial staged of development, Harry..." "Staged" should be "stages." "His robes normal billow were stifled by the furniture in the room,..." Either change to one of the following: "The robes' normal billow..." or " The normal billowing of the robes..." (Nice visual here, by the way with that sentence!) "...rough and tumble sort of boy, always taking what life deled out for him with his chin..." Change "deled" to "dealt." Even if spelled "dealed," it is not a word. "...Petunia had to look away, lest she fall into the empty tunnels of despair, never to immerge again." Change "immerge" to "emerge." "She threw her arms around the Potions Master’s neck and just bawled, not caring if he hexed when she let go." The last bit should read, "...not caring if he hexed her when she let go." "...the woman did eventually sit back up, whipping her eyes, her..." Change "whipping" to "wiping." "Whatever had driven his parents together, the Potions Master would never know, but it had lead him..." Change "lead" to "led." "…that bastard? His hurt you and lied..." Change "his" to "he's." Wrong spelling: "falling into the pit when a couple of complements had been given." "Complements" should be spelled "compliments." Author's Response: Yeah, the whole James Bond thing, I admit that I saw my movie cover of it and kept thinking about it today when I was watching it. Could you imagine him walking into a class in a white suit and introducing himself as, "Snape, Severus Snape," and then suddenly whipping out a gun and sprinting from the room and then doing a summersault out the door? HAHA! *snort* Makes me happy just thinking about it. And then all the kids would be like WTH?!?! Sorry. Back to the normal Harry Potter story. Thanks again for the review! :) |
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