| Title: Fourteen: The Crippling Vice
| 17 Nov 2015 4:49 pm
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| Reviewer: eh (Anonymous)
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I am in love with this story! Update soon--this is one of the best reconciliation scenes I've ever read.
| Title: Fourteen: The Crippling Vice
| 17 Nov 2015 4:10 pm
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| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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I have read Romeo and Juliet... It was a tragic yet cliché story, totally agree with Lily's sentiments on it. This chapter was really good. I was wondering what Harry's detentions would now entail if he did do something bad. Snape doesn't hate him lile he did before, but I doubt he would go easy on someone whom he knew as well as he now knows Potter.
| Title: Fourteen: The Crippling Vice
| 17 Nov 2015 2:45 pm
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| Reviewer: ilreies (Signed)
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multiple updates! one of my absolute fave fics! and it isnt even my birthday!! thank you thank you thank you for updating and im glad your muse is baaaaaack! :D
i loved the paradigm shift in snape's pov here! its smooth and not abrupt. so what's harry gonna do now with this change in snape??
oh gosh that escalated quickly. D:< poor bby harry and i wonder what's snape's reaction throughout all that!
loved how your last line had emphasised the whole point of harry's need to be good for snape: all for some more information about his mum )':
Oh, Harry. Oh the poor baby. I'm cheering him on for finally yelling at Snape. I hope he comes to his senses soon and gives poor Harry one hell of any apology.
| Title: Twelve: Blibbering Humdingers and Thieving Nargles
| 17 Nov 2015 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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HE'S ACTUALLY ALAN RICKMAN IN DISGUISE. I'VE BEEN LAUGHING FOR THIRTY MINUTES STRAIGHT
| Title: Thirteen: Cruelty
| 17 Nov 2015 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Oh, wow, what a great chapter! The ups-and-downs of Harry's emotions were very well drawn. And his confrontation with Snape was perfect, all the things you'd absolutely want Harry to say for himself, even as I completely emphasised with his feeling of humiliation for its public nature. I really felt him as a teenager in this, between the pretty girls and the crushing disappointment in Snape and hiding in the cupboard after. Wonderful
Loved the angst! Cant wait for the next chapter..
Major drama/angst. Keep 'em coming! :-)
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