Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Message in a Birthmark 17 Mar 2006 8:16 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I really enjoyed the beginning of this story with the Dursleys being civil to Harry rather than abusive.  I found the partial second chapter at your web page and wondered if you have completely abandoned this.  It seems to me that you have a unique spin to add to this genre and I would very much enjoy seeing you finish this.

Title: Message in a Birthmark 29 Sep 2005 6:57 pm
Reviewer: zafaran@f...fm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *very* good beginning. This is a nice narrative hook for what look like is going to be an interesting story. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
Title: Message in a Birthmark 19 Sep 2005 6:25 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked how you had the birthmark/hologram thingie instead of a time delayed letter like so many others. Nice origional idea
Title: Message in a Birthmark 31 Aug 2005 9:00 am
Reviewer: Terri (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent - looking forward to reading more!
Title: Message in a Birthmark 27 Aug 2005 11:06 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    You've got my attention. Can't wait for more.
Title: Message in a Birthmark 25 Aug 2005 4:55 pm
Reviewer: nancy in chicago (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi ... I like the start to this story. Still not happy with the "tell it in a letter / whatever" scenario, but I got to admit, it's a very good plot point. I hope that you have the next couple of chapters close to done, as I can't wait to see what Sev has said. He didn't seem to take it too badly -- but there is the DE thing to think of. I also hope, as I've seen wonderful starts peter off, because the author had a good high level concept & a start, but did not have a goal for the end, or a road map on how to get there. So, I hope that you have a goal in mind for where this story is going -- even if the destination changes along the way! good luck
Title: Message in a Birthmark 25 Aug 2005 12:53 pm
Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start! The birthmark thing is certainly unique. Though I thought I'd point out you've got 11AM at one point where I'm pretty sure you mean PM ;) Looking forward to more.
Title: Message in a Birthmark 25 Aug 2005 9:18 am
Reviewer: Terri (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent beginning - I look forward to reading more

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