| Title: A Potions Accident
| 15 Mar 2011 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: GriffinRaven (Anonymous)
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Truly a wicked story...I can't wait to find out if its the same/or different to your brilliant story "Babies can Teach a Lot of Lessons".
Wow, this story is very well done.
That was a great first chapter. I loved that Snape walked into his chamber with baby Harry and Harry side "Ga". I was sitting here laughing. It was great. Now, onto more chapters.
| Title: A Potions Accident
| 17 Apr 2006 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Two things: Snape should say "I've been looking after Potter since his first year!" not in his first year. The second is that a 3 week old baby does not make any sounds! At that age they are seldom doing more that looking--that is when they are not sleeping or eating! Otherwise, I love the concept and can't wait to see what you do with this story. Aging from 3 weeks to 15-16 years in 4 months is quite a lot! And I loved the touch of 'snitches' on the wallpaper. Why are there no walls in his room?
It is good to see that you have posted the story here, so I'm off to re-reading it. :)
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