| Title: Mischief and Punishment
| 20 Aug 2009 1:51 am
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| Reviewer: CapeBretonNewfoundlander (Anonymous)
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You have a winner. I am not a young person nor student but a 59 year old woman who is absolutely enjoying herself reading this story.
I have laughed very hard at some of the situations you have put Snape in and I can relate---minus any magic that takes place.
You have written a very funny and enjoyable story. Thanks for the laughs
I love this fic, and your dedication to it. Even though you were going through college, you STILL managed to write an amazing fic. I'm going to go through your profile and see if there is other stories I can read ;p
| Title: Easter Holidays
| 26 May 2009 7:36 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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the sky is blue because the sun's rays hit the Earth's atmosphere, where the light is scattered by nitrogen and oxygen molecules in the air. The blue wavelength of this light is affected more than the red and green wavelengths, causing the surrounding air to appear blue. At sunset, the sun's light passes farther through the atmosphere, deflecting and decreasing the blue in the air. Scattering by dust particles and pollution in the air causes the sunset to appear red.
| Title: The Ignorant Awakens
| 04 Apr 2009 5:48 am
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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MWAHAHAHA!!! I knew it! I knew Harry would call Sev daddy sooner or later!
Lol, Snape doesn't know how to handle Harry's affection. That was cute!
Lol! Mr. Malfoy, this conversation never happened. I hope Malfoy watches him again--that was funny!
Lol, I like the ladies staring at Sev in the park.
LOL! I like your story so far. One suggestion would be to go easy on the formatting--you've got a lot of bolded and italicized lettering and it distracts from the story, especially the all-caps that you use when Snape is screaming. You'll get the point across just fine with a good ol' exclamation point. I love the plot of this--good work!
-P.G.
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