| Title: The Ignorant Awakens
| 24 Dec 2008 2:24 pm
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| Reviewer: urshurak (Anonymous)
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Hi, I enjoyed your story very much, but you really need a beta; your grammar, punctuation, dictation and vocabulary are ... uh ... not very good.
| Title: The Ignorant Awakens
| 23 Sep 2008 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous)
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I love this story and I love the ending. Do a sequel please. Harry is so cute and Severus is too! "Sevvus" was a nice touch!
| Title: Dealing with spearation Anxiety
| 13 Sep 2008 8:01 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed)
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Hi, this is really funny. Snape especially.
| Title: The Ignorant Awakens
| 31 Aug 2008 2:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Niamh (Anonymous)
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let just say... there were tears :P
| Title: The Ignorant Awakens
| 23 Aug 2008 8:07 am
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| Reviewer: Laura (Anonymous)
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Reallly nice story I quite enjoyed it
...the underground to london? Umm...the underground is a type of underground train that only goes round london...it doesnt go to other cities. Lol...sorry i just laughed when i read the "underground to london".
| Title: The Ignorant Awakens
| 16 May 2008 4:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Serafine (Anonymous)
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I don't mean to be rude, but that last, where Snape is asking Harry to stay with him, seems almost directly lifted from Celebony's ficiton, Family Night. I'd edit it quick if I were you.
| Title: Christmas at the Order
| 25 Jan 2008 12:07 am
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| Reviewer: shawn (Anonymous)
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awesome fic! Super funny and heart felt at the same time!
awww....that last line was too cute!
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