Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Potions Accident 14 Jun 2006 4:07 am
Reviewer: kylastargazer (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great first chapter.  I loved that Snape walked into his chamber with baby Harry and Harry side "Ga".  I was sitting here laughing.  It was great.  Now, onto more chapters.
Title: Complexity at Hogwarts 13 Jun 2006 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE IT!! beautiful!!write some more!!!
Title: Complexity at Hogwarts 13 Jun 2006 1:03 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How can this be nearing the end????  Harry is only seven, Snape is about to quit and bedlam is advancing!  What a dramatic way to end a chapter!!!  And I don't believe that Dumbledore said that!  I know it was preceeded by a firm notice of "stupidity coming," but I've never heard that said to Snape before!!!!  Besides, I believe as Snape did:  That a living marked sudent is better than a dead unmarked student!  Dumbledore must have been really frustrated to have shouted that.  Please don't tell us that Snape will send Harry back to the Dursley's in retaliation!  Harry would never recover from such abandonment.  Snape seems mad enough at the world, and Albus and his Griffindor's in particular, to commit such an extremely foolish act.  I predict that he will mention it to Harry in a fit of anger and Harry will run away and be captured by Voldy.  I'm probably wrong, but . . . It would be a truely catastrophic end to this folly, even if Harry is able to defeat him in some way.

    Author's Response:

    As I have said in some previews Author Notes, Harry will take a final dose of Potion when he is between 7.5 and 8 year old that will return him to his final age.  I cannot tell you what will take place as it will spoil the fun but let us say Snape is getting much attached to Harry to traumatize him severely from now on.

     Now what happens?  You will read. 

     

    Be patient, next chapter is currently written.

     

    Love Kathlin aka preety_lady_serenity 

Title: Questions and Meetings Arranged 17 Apr 2006 8:46 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That was a very dramatic place to stop!!!!

    When is Snape going to realize that Hagrid reminds Harry of Vernon?

Title: Decisions and Revisions 17 Apr 2006 8:32 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like your story very much!!!  I did have some question regarding your gammar and usage, but after finding out you are Greek writing in English, all I can say is anything I tried to write in Greek would be total nonsense.  That makes you more talented than I could ever be!  So, I read your story and enjoy your plot.  Watching Snape slowly come to care for Harry has been enjoyable.  While I find it difficult to consider someone who wouldn't find baby Harry adorable, Snape has had to do a 180 degree change in attitude in roughly 10 months!  Lucky Harry was so adorable--after all, despite the abuse from the Dursley's he knew how to be a freind and care for others.  Seems to be an inborn trait.  I'm surprised that your Harry will not grow taller than he did last time, or even be smarter.  After all, in addition to his old memories this time he has someone intelligent caring for him and supplying him with good food.  Won't he grow up to be taller and smarter this time around?  Remember that he's learning Occulumency as a child in this AU.  So if they can change that aspect of his life, why can't they change more?  I look forward to seeing how your plot plays out.  Please continue!!!
Title: A Potions Accident 17 Apr 2006 5:11 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Two things:  Snape should say "I've been looking after Potter since his first year!" not in his first year.  The second is that a 3 week old baby does not make any sounds!  At that age they are seldom doing more that looking--that is when they are not sleeping or eating!  Otherwise, I love the concept and can't wait to see what you do with this story.  Aging from 3 weeks to 15-16 years in 4 months is quite a lot!  And I loved the touch of 'snitches' on the wallpaper.  Why are there no walls in his room?
Title: Discoveries. 10 Apr 2006 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww!!! I LOVE how baby Harry says that he wants to marry ginny! So sweet! I loved the Quidditch match, but I really enjoyed the change of pace with McGonagall and her problem and the conversation with Severus. Oh and i loved the beginning ice cream scene how Harry smeared it all over Snape's face! Haha! Cute.
Title: A trip for eye-glasses and a boom-boom night 10 Apr 2006 10:19 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Adorable. XD I loved their little outing and especially the hair cutting bit. Bibi is cool! I loved how Harry liked the sheep. Alektor Bibblymiwibly is a marvelous character. I loved how they got wet right before they got back to Hogwarts. I think I'm skipping around in the story. Haha, I guess I'll go back and see and review the ones I missed.
Title: Babysitting Sunday 10 Apr 2006 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww!! This is so cute! I love this!! :D My favourite linnes: Madam Pomfrey was busy taking care of hexed teenagers. LOL that was so sarcastically Snape. Also when baby Harry raised his eyes in desperation when Ron tried to feed him! LOL. Harry is so adorable! Thanks so much for posting this!
Title: Decisions and Revisions 20 Feb 2006 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Miriel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, I absolutely adore your story, I read it on ff.net since more then a year, and an update still makes my day :-). I hope you get as much pleasure (or more) of writing it, as I reading it, and keep on writing! Thanks from Hungary

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