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Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 27 Nov 2023 12:15 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    Finally both boys called a truce. I hope it lasts throughout Hogwarts. 

Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 25 Feb 2011 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwwww Snape really is just a teddy bear! I'm glad that Draco was punished, so that way he wouldn't run back to school and embarrass Harry!
Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 12 Jul 2007 11:33 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) [Report This]
    “Tink Ah wash an inbalid, da way oo fush ober be,” Harry said around the thermometer.

    lol. That has to be my favorite line in this chapter. I love how Harry just shrugs stuff off when it has to do with his physical well being, but if it's personal and emotional then he is just SO touchy. lol. Love that kid. You did a great job on this story! You are fantastic!!!
Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 08 Jan 2007 8:30 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]

    Perry,

    I thought the subtle clues that not all was right with Harry were particularly clever.  The whole shrinking of the nose was a riot. 

    You did a great job keeping Draco in character by making him a self centered brat while at the same time giving an impression early on in this chapter that he didn't know exactly what he had done.  His over the top reaction to being spanked was perfect!  Later when he explains to Harry what all happened, we get the full impact not only of the danger Harry was in, but how horrible it was for Draco to see Harry in such a state and how much he regrets what he did.  Malfoy is no sweetheart, but neither is he a monster like his father. 

    The ending of this chapter was a true delight!  I loved Harry's sense of humor and Snape's care of Harry were beautifully written.

    As always, this was fantastic and I avidly look forward to the next chapter!

    Tracy

Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 07 Jan 2007 4:38 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]

    Very nice chapter.  So Harry didn't even notice that he was thinking of Snape as a father, eh?  The banter at the end of the chapter was great, too.  And it was SO Harry for him to feel obligated to point out that Draco was beaten by his father.

    I must admit that it's nice to see someone who recognizes that children know the difference between a spanking and a beating.  One is done with love and in control, and the other is all about the parent's frustration and lack of control.

Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 07 Jan 2007 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nicely done. I really like the interactions between the characters. Nice blend of badness and goodness among the individuals. Snape dealing with the boys are great. Looking forward to more of the story.
Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 07 Jan 2007 1:20 am
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story to death. It just keeps getting better!!!
Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 06 Jan 2007 8:17 pm
Reviewer: youngwriders (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This was a very great chapter.  It was very clever how you let Harry watch without making it creepy that he was watching. Nice job.  You also did a great job with explaining Draco's POV so we don't have to hate him.  I feel a bit sorry for him, but also hope he does or says something stupid at supper so he can get it again before bed.  With a ruler, or hairbrush maybe?  Come on... fair is fair. Or maybe he could just relate to Harry about a previous spanking from Snape.  Seemed like maybe Snape has paddled him before, both because Draco seemed to know what was coming and because Snape knew Draco didn't respond well to lecturing during a spanking as Harry seemed to.  Nice job with this chapter, and indeed with the story.  Thanks for indulging my spanking wish list.

Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 06 Jan 2007 7:02 pm
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Draco... even though he did deserve to "get it." I'm glad that Draco and Harry seem to be getting on better. Oh and Harry's bleeding, that was so sureal it was cool. I like how you're showing that Snape really does care about Harry, especial over his concerns in this plant incident. And the end of the chapter was sweet. Snape's last line- I hope it meant more than just supporting Harry for the walk.
Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 06 Jan 2007 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my!!!! That was a great chapter, the whole bleeding thing was great.

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