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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Finally both boys called a truce. I hope it lasts throughout Hogwarts.
lol. That has to be my favorite line in this chapter. I love how Harry just shrugs stuff off when it has to do with his physical well being, but if it's personal and emotional then he is just SO touchy. lol. Love that kid. You did a great job on this story! You are fantastic!!!
Perry, I thought the subtle clues that not all was right with Harry were particularly clever. The whole shrinking of the nose was a riot. You did a great job keeping Draco in character by making him a self centered brat while at the same time giving an impression early on in this chapter that he didn't know exactly what he had done. His over the top reaction to being spanked was perfect! Later when he explains to Harry what all happened, we get the full impact not only of the danger Harry was in, but how horrible it was for Draco to see Harry in such a state and how much he regrets what he did. Malfoy is no sweetheart, but neither is he a monster like his father. The ending of this chapter was a true delight! I loved Harry's sense of humor and Snape's care of Harry were beautifully written. As always, this was fantastic and I avidly look forward to the next chapter! Tracy
Very nice chapter. So Harry didn't even notice that he was thinking of Snape as a father, eh? The banter at the end of the chapter was great, too. And it was SO Harry for him to feel obligated to point out that Draco was beaten by his father. I must admit that it's nice to see someone who recognizes that children know the difference between a spanking and a beating. One is done with love and in control, and the other is all about the parent's frustration and lack of control.
This was a very great chapter. It was very clever how you let Harry watch without making it creepy that he was watching. Nice job. You also did a great job with explaining Draco's POV so we don't have to hate him. I feel a bit sorry for him, but also hope he does or says something stupid at supper so he can get it again before bed. With a ruler, or hairbrush maybe? Come on... fair is fair. Or maybe he could just relate to Harry about a previous spanking from Snape. Seemed like maybe Snape has paddled him before, both because Draco seemed to know what was coming and because Snape knew Draco didn't respond well to lecturing during a spanking as Harry seemed to. Nice job with this chapter, and indeed with the story. Thanks for indulging my spanking wish list.
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