| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 02 May 2008 3:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
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What a wonderful chapter!!!
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 03 Mar 2007 7:06 pm
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| Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous)
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Well done again, how are you doing it!!!!
please write s sequel, i would so love one
and im sure al those who are just too moved by this story and therefore forgett to rewiev want one tooo
so pleaaaaaaaaassseeeee, do one for us ;)
oh could you maybe ad a chapter telling what your decision will be?, that would be great!!!!
so keep writing!!! miracle
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 27 Feb 2007 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Carolina Casaril (Anonymous)
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OK, you asked for it. I didn't like the story at the beginning because Harry came across as childish and younger than his age. Now, Harry has grown up and seems to have caught up to his age, which is a relief, and if he stays that mature and we can expect less of the spanking, and more of the draco/harry fun at school thing... and a development of the secrecy of Snape adopting Harry (because Voldemort simply can't find out, and given Draco knows... something needs to be done to address the very real threat that causes). well... if that works out, I'd read a sequel... :)
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 27 Feb 2007 8:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Anonymous)
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Perry,
You sure do know boy behavior! Love how Harry and Draco said good-bye to each other. Can't have them get mushy now can we? And Snape's suggestion of adoption was wonderfully written. Harry seemed about ready to fall out of his chair! LOL! Sad as I will be to see this story come to an end, it has been fantastic!
Ah that's sweet. If it must end, I'm glad that you'll end it with an adoption. Snape and Harry's attitude to it was pefect (in character and such...) I would like to say that a sequel would wonderful! I hate to see this story really end.
*Eyes slyly* Can I have both a sequel and another story? :)
Seriously, this is my all time favorite. You've done a great job, I'm sad to see it end.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 27 Feb 2007 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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SEQUEL!!! Please!!!
I love this story.... please write more....
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 27 Feb 2007 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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I love this story!!!
I didn't expect Snape to adopt Harry...
I can't wait to read more!!!
Having Snape realize that Harry needed training in money was an excellent way of showing the transition from discipline to training for Harry.
While I love the discussion with Snape and Harry, for some reason it felt rushed. I can't exactly put my finger on why. I know that by now Harry would want this, but I guess it might have been good to show him actually thinking beforehand about how things would change back at Hogwarts and realizing he wasn't too happy about that.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: aslade (Anonymous)
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Well I´m very sad to know that it will be only one more chapter. This story has been great and I have to admit that I love the long stories more. It would be great if this story will have a sequel, and see how this pair continue with their relacionship in Howards.
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