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Reviews For Muggleville
Author's Response: Yes, I thought so too. :) Thank you for your review!
Anyhow, thanks! This is one of my favorites! :-) Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I am so happy that you have been enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!
And the interaction between Harry and Dumbledore is wonderful. Dumbledore has had to make a lot of tough decisions regarding Harry's welfare, and I can see both sides. In some ways, Privet Drive was the safest place for Harry, but I do feel like Dumbledore could have done more to ensure his well-being. But hopefully, having this summer will be like a second chance for Harry. Author's Response: Hi Kristeh! Thanks for reviewing! I'm really enjoying reading them all. You've reminded me about Remus... unfortunately, I hadn't planned on doing any more with him, but maybe I'll write him in later on once they get back... if they get back. :)
I have today off from work and intend to relax and enjoy the day reading. Thanks for sharing the story. :) Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story! :) I hope that you keep reading!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Onward, ho!
I love where this is going. Harry is so deserving at a second chance at having some happy memories of his earlier childhood and it sounds like that could be the end result of this summer. Tracy Author's Response: Thank you Tracy! :) I thought so too.
Aah, Snape is quite petty in this one isn't he. Especially when Harry's self esteem is so low he doesn't think he deserves a biscuit. But he was a little worried so there's a heart in there somewhere. I say you should stick to Modest Mouse, but maybe you could listen to the Good News... album next time. A little more upbeat. Death to candy pop! I was wondering why Harry hasn't really thought about the death of Sirius since he was at Hogwarts. Has he forgotten about the whole deal or moved on already? Please update soon, I can't wait for the next one (which is why I'm rereading!) Author's Response: Modest mouse rocks. I don't know why Harry isn't wondering.. I can't really remember the beginning of the storyright now. I'll have to review it. XD Thanks for your feedback!
constringent... do you mean a "contingent" of Death Eaters, or is this just a word I don't know?.... Interesting premise! I like it so far. Author's Response: Yes, I probably meant contingent. Glad you like it so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for your understanding. :) I want to update soon but we'll see what comes out.
Hey Jan! I thought that I would try to return the favor to you by reviewing your story *and YEA for the update!*...although I doubt my reviews will be nearly as helpful as yours are to me...So here goes! I love the conversation between Dumbledore and Harry-Dumbledore is so tentative, and Harry, at first, acts a little indifferent...but then, certain things grab you, like this sentence: Harry looked withdrawn before his face gave a glimmer of hope. I really felt for Harry, because I knew what Dumbledore would say next...and then "I have no where else to go" was said in a perfectly dejected way...as I reread this, I notice the irony of your last line: "...I will make sure that I find someone to spoil you and someone to protect you" It really describes the two entering 'guardians' well-The Muggle-studies teacher (her name escapes me right now) is of course the loving, nurturing one...but Severus is certainly NOT going to spoil Harry...but he will, begrudingly, protect him. GREAT opening chapter...It's a nice lead up to the rest...and good explanations on the previous events...I like how the point of attack for your opening chapter is AFTER the DE attack...and you discribe it without reliving it. Great job! Okay, I found one little thing: "I'm afraid that he did not survive capture." And leave it at that.-shouldn't it be left? On a side note, I tried the link at the beginning of the chapter, to learn more about the plot (I don't know why, considering I've read this before) but the link didn't work-thought you might want to know... --Amber Author's Response: Thanks Amber!! :) I'll go fix that link, I moved the pages a couple of weeks ago. I really enjoyed your review! The typos and such will help me since I plan to go back and edit all the chapters when i reach chapter 20 but you don't really have to if you don't want to. It can become tedious after awhile. I know about some of them already, and I'll catch lots when I reread but stating them would make sure I didn't miss them. Read on and i hope you enjoy! :) |
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