If Albus thinks that Harry's proximity to Voldemort affects his scar, I wonder if Snape's mark will be affected by being further away from Voldy? I also wonder what the tea set is for? Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: I think Snape's Dark Mark will be better as well due to the distance. :) Thanks for the review.
So now the adventure begins! Oh, poor Snape--is he really the ugliest man Hoppity's ever seen?
And what were her parents thinking? Although as someone with a unique name myself, I can't really talk.
Also can't blame Harry for not wanting Snape to be in possession of his wand, but it does seem like the best solution under the circumstances.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Haha, it's more like, What was the author thinking? LOL. Thanks so much for enjoying the story and for commenting. I really appreciate it.
Good chapter. I have expected the six year old body to take over a bit for Harry and see him throw a temper tanturm about his wand being taken away and given to Snape. It would have been interesting to see how the three adults would have handled it. Anyway, on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hmmm... well that is what one-shots are for! There is always room for Alternate version of chapters that are in stories in alternate universes!
| Title: Introductions
| 14 Apr 2007 12:36 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Jan,
I cheated myself by not reading this sooner! This is absolutely delightful! I wish real life would leave me be so I could hole up and read it start to finish!
Tracy
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much Tracy! *blush*
| Title: Introductions
| 25 Nov 2005 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: phantomsgirl04 (Anonymous)
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Tehe! Right off the bat, I love the absentmindness of Hoppity...she forgot to use magic...So funny! But then again, she could have been thinking as a Muggle...oh, this is great: "Hoppity nodded and pretended that she remembered what Dusky's tonic was." LOL!!! This is a great line describing Hoppity's personality a bit-she's eager to please, isn't she? OH!!! "It was then that the office door sprung open to reveal the ugliest man she had ever seen." What a way to introduce Severus! You weren't lying when you said, 'no romance,' were you? LOL Well...Severus is NOT attractive-no matter how many stories you read that say otherwise. And the jab about Hoppity's name was made in Severus's perfect snark...YEA chapter!
--Amber
Author's Response: LOL, yeah totally no romance. The purpose of the story was to have Snape and Harry go through a Muggle childhood-like summer. :) And no romance was in that plan. YEA review! :D Thanks!
"Wait! Snape's going to be my new father?" Poor lad.
Snape sneered. "A little slow on the uptake there, Potter?"
LOL... that part always makes me laugh. It's so darn like Snape to say something totally rude like that when he didn't really need to say anything at all to aggravate the situation.
Soo... I'm a bit confused about the wands. Snape does have Harry's real wand right? Harry has the sucky one (or is he not allowed to carry that either)?
Author's Response: Yeah Snape has his real one, Harry has like this dumb training one. Blah. I think Harry has to have SOME protection with hm no matter what, but it doesn't matte if the training one gets lost or stolen or confiscaded. *pats Harry on the head*
LOL, the little piece of your conversation with Star at the end of the chapter was amusing. ;-)
By the way, have I mentioned how I love the look of the site? It's SOO much easier to read things here than it is on FF.net--better font (I think, or so it seems), better background, easier on the eyes.. I'm a happy reader! Combine that with a great story (MUGGLEVILLE!) and life is very, very good. Now if only my aunt and uncle would get home.. ;-)
Poor Harry. The wand being taken away was a severe blow, worsened by it being given to Snape. I think it was a "good" choice by Dumbledore to not tell Harry that Snape was going to be his "father" for the duration--he would most certainly have refused, vocally. However, as it is, Harry's going to be rather angry at Dumbledore, I'd wager. Or maybe you're going to work it out so he's not.. I guess I'll have to read on to see!
Author's Response: YAY! YOU LOVE MY SITE! YAAAAAYYY!!!!! And you can pick what background you want too by picking a different layout. The font is Times New Roman... I think. *sings her life is good song* La la la laaaaa... I just love a little angry Harry in the morning...
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