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Title: The Buildup to... 30 Dec 2008 7:19 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness! You have made my whole month by updating your story. I love how, little by little, Snape and Harry are figuring each other out. But, it seems to me that Harry is heading for a bit of trouble. Can't wait for your next update. Soon, I hope?

    Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment! Thank you! :) I just posted the next chapter.
Title: The Buildup to... 30 Dec 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    Jan,

    I have missed your story and was afraid that your other commitments might have made it impossible for you to continue. You cannot imagine my delight when I saw the Christmas update. What a wonderful present. Thank you so much!

    Author's Response: Nope, difficult but not impossible! I will strive onward! Thanks for your review. :)
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I posted a comment earlier and I have no clue if it went through because the page went kaput. Darn that internet. Anyways, back to the reason I'm posting here in the first place. I want to let you know that there are eager readers here waiting on your every word. I'm one of them. I still want to see what Snape is gonna do with that sailor suit. XD But I also love that last line of this chapter "He'd shower, alright, but he wouldn't comb his hair". It's pretty humorous. Keep it up, we readers are here and we love your work.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means a lot when readers enjoy the story and can tell me that. It reminds me to keep writing, no matter what! I just updated the next chapter.
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 12:38 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! Really pleased to see there was an update. :) I just quickly read over the last few chapters too. I really like how Snape is becoming and how Harry is just starting to notice some of how Snape is changing. That is the best.

    Author's Response: Oh great! I'm so glad that you are noticing! Thank you!
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Please do update soon--this was really good. I wish you hadn't posted it early though because it was so short and it didn't really feel like a full-dose of Harry and Snape goodness. Every chapter before this has had a sort of resolution that this one does not and it's kind of unsettling. I would rather have the long chapter and wait a while for it than get a small chapter that might have been rushed (though this one doesn't feel that way--it just feels like it was posted prematurely).

    I'm worried about how Snape and Harry are going to get along after the tantrum. After all, it's obvious that Snape is really starting to care about Harry and I'd hate to see him go back to his previously insufferable self.

    Thanks for writing such a great fic.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Aw, yes it wasn't a full chapter, but I was afriad that if I didn't update then, that I never would. I'm glad i did even though it took months for the next chapter to be posted. Thanks for your review! :)
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 6:50 am
Reviewer: ranDum InSanity (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You updated! If I were there, I would give you cookies.

    Author's Response: I love cookies! :) Thanks!
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 12:52 am
Reviewer: Tri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love your story, and how IC Harry is, and those rare Nice-Snape moments, oh, and the name Hoppiti oh, and I'm waiting for when they realized about harry's bday, yay!!

    Author's Response: Oh hooray! I'm so glad that you like Hoppity's name, and the characterations of the characters. They will indeed remember Harry's birthday, but only when it's too late.
Title: The Buildup to... 27 Dec 2008 12:05 am
Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay update! Please finish the story!

    Author's Response: I will do my best!
Title: The Buildup to... 26 Dec 2008 5:10 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    happy that you updated!

    Author's Response: thank you! :) I'm glad!
Title: The Buildup to... 26 Dec 2008 5:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    In response to your response to my review. Ooh,,.my head is spinning!

    I could see Snape struggling with himself not to hit Harry. You could have his inner turmoil on that, and then I could realistically see him getting frustrated, picking Harry up bodily and putting him in his room with a strong warning to stay put or else! Then when Harry calms down, I could see Snape coming up with some punishment that Harry absolutely loathes, like he's not allowed to play outside, or not allowed to watch tv, or scrub caulderons or something equally horrible.

    But yeah...I could see Snape definitely wanting to hit Harry, but stopping himself because of Hoppity and not wanting to be like his own abusive father.

    Yeah, you could have Hoppity and Snape arguing about an appropriate punishment. That would make nice angst! Oh, I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story, just offering ideas.

    But I have faith that you'll come up with something great and funny too!

    Oh...I'm so anxious for the next part! Did I say that I'm really glad that you're back!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review!! i didn't tell you at the time, but your comments helped me get over the hurdle of writing this scene, and helped me figure out what was going to happen! You really helped contribute! Thank you! I thought about all of your ideas, and came up with a scebe, but I'm afraid that I didn't write it down right away, so I forgot about the details and just wrote what came to me. It would be interesting to see some alternate one-shots, however.

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