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Reviews For Muggleville
Title: Bubble and Squeak 24 Jun 2009 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is great! Should we expect frequent updates from you now? I love the chapter. Some nice bonding going on and Harry is so adorable!

    Author's Response: Thank you Mahi! I'm not sure how frequent updates will be. I will try, but it depends on my schedule and such.
Title: Bubble and Squeak 24 Jun 2009 12:38 am
Reviewer: mahawee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    did i say how much i love u and love this story :) thank u so much for the fast update i like it this way even if the chapter is shorter weeheee i love this story every thing is so in plase and your snape is so snape
    i love this story so much that after reading the last chapter i have been eating pitzza and noddle every day coz i was thinking about it :) i wanna read what happen in the party so bad well harry do some thing to anger snape can't wait great now i won't be aple to sleep
    oh please mke me happier and update soon sorry for my english :(

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :) I will try to update soon.
Title: Bubble and Squeak 24 Jun 2009 12:20 am
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Snape is so very good at rubbing people's mistakes in front of their nose but he's finally softening a bit. XD Too bad for Harry that it means triple the veggies and extra bedtimes. But I suppose Harry probably would prefer it to scrubbing cauldrons! xD But I loved this chapter. It was an extra lot of Snape and Harry and that is so very appealing. This story has a natural bonding element to it that I love. You are able to make the characters bond without distorting their personalities. That takes talent. Can't wait to read more.
    Your friend,
    Basilisk Prince
    ps. eagerly awaiting the next chapter and the sailor suit of doom!

    Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry but it could be worse. :) thank you so much for your comments! I really enjoy reading them. :) i'm afraid that the sailer suit has quite a few chapters to go before it shows up... near the end. :)
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Glorificus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lovely. such a joy to read-I am always excited when your story is updated.

    Please continue!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to continue soon!
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Tri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "(...)but surely Harry wouldn't get into that much trouble, that easily."
    ha!, would you like to bet on that? *grins like an idiot*
    thanks for updating so fast!!!

    Author's Response: You're welcome! :) Yes, Harry can't help but get into trouble.
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, I'm willing to bet Harry will get into trouble and way too easily. ;-)

    I was so excited to get another chapter update so soon! And it wasn't even that short at all! Yes, you rock.

    This was great. I liked how Snape and Harry got up early and had breakfast together. And him being made to take a nap is cute. Though it's too bad he doesn't get his ice cream....

    Anyhow, this is great! I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter! :D

    Author's Response:

    You'd win that bet! :) Hehe. i just hope that Harry doesn't get lost...

    Thank you so much for all of your comments!

Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 5:31 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe. nice. i lovies me some ice cream! Ah just the wonderful story of muggleville. so lovely. I loved you're AN, didn't bother betaing. haha. yeah that's always boring to do. :D Thankies for updating so fast.

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much Angie!! :) Yup - didn't really bothering checking for mistakes. I'm sure that Harry and Hoppity would agree about the ice cream. :)
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 5:21 pm
Reviewer: Vintage (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it! and I love this shorter chapters, quicker updates (btw the chapter didn't seem too short) I hope harry doesn't get in too much trouble and I'm so happy he was able to ressit Snape's mind magic

    Author's Response: Yes, it was a big accomplishment for Harry to be able to finally suceed at something. :) I didn't plan it, that's just the wyay it came out, and it surprised me. Thanks for your comments!
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 4:59 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Thanks for the quick update. I hope Snape and Harry have fun at the block party but it sounds like that there may be some trouble. Don't make us wait too long to find out.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I think that they will have fun, but not too much trouble. :)
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "He felt like he was making a deal with a rouge" It's rogue; he's not making a deal with a cosmetic.

    And bubble and squeak sounds awful.

    But the interaction between Snape and Harry was great and I enjoyed it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I actually looked that up in the dictionary to make sure that I was getting the right spelling, but I guess it didn't transfer right through my brain at 2:30 AM.

    Bubble and squeek is actually supposed to be quite good. It's a breakfast staple.

    Thanks for your review.


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