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Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 3:46 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love fast updates. Nice chapter. Snape is becoming more parental all the time. I'm sure if anyone told him, he would have a fit.

    Author's Response: I bet he would! Haha! thank you for your comments. :)
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Cordy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for this new update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 1:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw that was so sweet, and an update so quickly. I'm impressed. Yes, I agree about the smaller chapters. I was just contemplating that recently. I personally would prefer to have smaller chapters, and more frequent updates than longer chapters and have to wait long periods for updates. The story flows better in my mind if I don't have to wait too long.

    I really loved that interaction between Snape and Harry. That was too cute. I love how they negotiated and Snape softened up a bit, without losing any of his authority or leverage. That was really sweet.

    Great chapter Jan, I can't wait for the next.

    Oh, and I loved the last line. How much trouble could one small, messy-haired boy get into? This is Harry Potter, we're talking about.

    You know it's strange but I don't usually like a de-aged Harry, and yours is one of the few I read, but I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait till he goes back to normal though, and I hope that he can still be cared for by Snape and Hoppity. I think that they balance each other out and give Harry what he needs.

    Okay, so I'm rambling. It's early in the morning and I'm getting ready for work. So, please update soon. I'm dying to see the "block" party! Hee hee!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Pandora! I have to agree with what you said - that the story flows better if you don't have to wait as long to read it. I think that an update every other day, or couple of days works best, but unfortunately I am not that fast of a writer. :) I think that not obsessing about the chapter and worrying about errors was slowing me down, as well as making the chapters so long. I would write half of it and then put it away for awhile (sometimes a long while) when just posting that I had was long enough to be a shorter chapter, even though there wasn't a natural end to it. And then I would look, and look at it when in actuality, I don't make that many errors to make it unreadable. So I'm just going to keep trucking along.

    I'm glad that you like my deaged Harry. I think that it is very difficult to keep both Harry and Snape in character in this genre of story.

    Don't worry, Harry will be able to go to both Snape and Hoppity once he is reaged. Spending a summer with people just makes you close to them, and they don't really have a choice. :)

Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 12:21 pm
Reviewer: wisdominart (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter!
    I get so immersed in the world you've created every time I read this story. I love it! Fantastic job!

    Author's Response: Thank you, wisdominart! :) I love your comments.
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 11:21 am
Reviewer: sappysam (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic!! I seriously love this story and yes i fell off my seat when I saw the email saying you had updated!! I think your shorter chapters are working for you!! Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou!! Looking forward to many more updates!!

    Author's Response: You're welcome! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Title: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009 10:19 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh that was quick! I liked the chapter,. the block party should be great :)

    Author's Response: Thnk you! :)
Title: The Tantrum 22 Jun 2009 12:29 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww....the long awaited tantrum. And it was all about noodles and vegetables, lol.

    Loved the chapter, btw. I love how you are very, very slowly leading Snape to the realization that Harry is just a boy with too many expectations on his small shoulders. The boy needs as many advocates as he can possibly get and having Snape in his corner is just what he needs.

    I loved Harry in this chapter. He is just a mess of little boy emotions and needs, isn't he? He definitely knows how to push Snape's buttons.

    Hoppity was great in this chapter, too. Maybe some of her gentleness will rub off on Snape soon.

    As for the subject of spanking, I neither agree nor disagree. After saying that, I do have to say that it would seem in character for Snape to be the type of 'parent' to use corporal punishment effectively. He definitely has a no nonsense approach to discipline, doesn't he?

    There are some fanfictions out there that deal with the idea of spanking in a very responsible way and are very well written. Then, of course, there are others that are all about the punishments. Either way, what you said is perfect....."please be educated about everything you read.' Wise words, indeed.

    Anyway, loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. More of gentle Snape moments, I hope. Thanks for sharing and take care.

    Author's Response: Thank you, curlybean for your review! :) I love reading your comments. Yes, I believe that more gentle Snape moments will come, but slowly. :) I only wish that I were a faster writer. Sorry for taking so long to update. Thanks for being so patient with me!
Title: The Tantrum 20 Jun 2009 2:30 pm
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    As I've said before, I love this story! I'm so happy to read it. I see why you choose not to use spanking in this chapter. I can see both sides of the argument when it comes to spanking but I'm not really here to talk about spanking now am I? XD So, Pizza and noodle tantrum. Love that...just like a kid to fuss over what's for dinner! Some stories never start to transition Harry into being a normal little boy because he was abused. The truth is he always was tough and had to be when he was denied all basic comforts. Even when he's very little now, I can see a very canon Harry here. I love this story. Your Snape is starting to soften just a tiny bit and I love it. Maybe they can teach Harry to swim...or something! Or maybe Harry will do something to deserve the humiliating sailor boy suit although it seems less likely now that Snape is softening. XD Anyways, keep going. You still have a reader right here, anxiously waiting.
    Your friend,
    BasiliskPrince

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much BasiliskPrince for your comments! :) Great ideas! I'm so glad that you can see a canon Harry. The sailor suit won't turn up for some time. :) Keep reading. and thanks for your support!!
Title: The Tantrum 20 Jun 2009 8:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--your Snape was very compassionate without being out of character. I hope Harry's next day is a little better!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you PG! It will be a very eventful next day. Stay tuned! :)
Title: The Tantrum 20 Jun 2009 6:14 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you Rebel_Dream! :)

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