Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 26 Mar 2006 12:56 am
Reviewer: DebstheSnapefan (Signed) [Report This]
    what i would like to happen is - snape helps him gives him potions and in turn Harry helps Snape with his injuries his being worse and needing attending too. of course he needs to go, so he goes. he also sends Harry new clothes and potions to him as well as books to read and that. As well as food making dobby go to the dursleys every day!
Title: Chapter 1 25 Mar 2006 5:36 am
Reviewer: Hey_Zelra (Signed) [Report This]
    I am interested in seeing how this turns out. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: The second chapter is on now, and I hope you like where I'm going with it.
Title: Chapter 1 23 Mar 2006 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Great beginning! Poor Hedwig!! :( I like how the neighbbors and such are aware of the problem and the worry of Petunia that they might do something. Poor Harry, I hope that someone helps him get out of this mess. Perhaps Snape? I like how Snape realized at the end what Harry's life is like. It was nicely done, and not "usual" feeling even though many stories follow that line. You have a couple of typos you may want to go over if you have some time later.



    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked it Jan, I felt sorry for Hedwig, but it was necessary for the plot to go on. About Snape you'll see what he does next.I believe it's quite unexpcted, although the plot has been used before.

    I'll correct the typos and repost the corrected chapter

Title: Chapter 1 23 Mar 2006 9:22 am
Reviewer: greeneyes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, this is great!  I especially enjoyed Petunia's concern, even as I still heartily despise her, and Snape's reaction to seeing Harry's home life so far.  Please, please, *please* continue!

    Author's Response: I will continue don't worry chapters two and three are already written and ready for posting when I finish proof reading them. :)
Title: Chapter 1 23 Mar 2006 3:20 am
Reviewer: phantomsgirl04 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh! This sounds really good! And I'm delighted to see something new from you...I can't wait to see the next part!


    Author's Response:

    Thanks :)

    Although I haven't done much for my other stories, the muses haven't been idle.I really have more than 30 plot bunny stories (they are more than 20 pages each) but I did not want to post anything until I finished it. This one couldn't wait until finished because of the Fic Fest due. date.


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