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Reviews For Another Chance At Childhood
Author's Response: The second chapter is on now, and I hope you like where I'm going with it.
Great beginning! Poor Hedwig!! :( I like how the neighbbors and such are aware of the problem and the worry of Petunia that they might do something. Poor Harry, I hope that someone helps him get out of this mess. Perhaps Snape? I like how Snape realized at the end what Harry's life is like. It was nicely done, and not "usual" feeling even though many stories follow that line. You have a couple of typos you may want to go over if you have some time later. Author's Response: Glad you liked it Jan, I felt sorry for Hedwig, but it was necessary for the plot to go on. About Snape you'll see what he does next.I believe it's quite unexpcted, although the plot has been used before. I'll correct the typos and repost the corrected chapter
Author's Response: I will continue don't worry chapters two and three are already written and ready for posting when I finish proof reading them. :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) Although I haven't done much for my other stories, the muses haven't been idle.I really have more than 30 plot bunny stories (they are more than 20 pages each) but I did not want to post anything until I finished it. This one couldn't wait until finished because of the Fic Fest due. date. |
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