Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 26 Jul 2007 4:55 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful and what an unlimited opportunity in divergent paths you can follow. More soon please
Title: Chapter 3 11 Jul 2007 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Dhruva (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, This is excellent. Please, please write more.
Title: Chapter 3 11 Jul 2007 3:38 am
Reviewer: kittycatgirl85 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update soon! I adore your story. It's always so much fun to have a Harry that lets his Slytherin out to play. This is one of the most unique variations of this prompt that I have read; keep writing.
Title: Chapter 3 27 Jun 2007 11:33 am
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A very interesting idea. I hope you continue with this. I haven't seen anything similar and it promises to be a wonderful story. The first three chapters were well written and interesting. I hope an update soon follows.
Title: Chapter 3 13 Jun 2007 6:48 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent start to the story so far. Are they going to stay at the Dursley's or will they go elsewhere? Does Harry even need to go back to Hogwarts with all of Severus' knowlege now? I really really hope you are still working on this story even though it has been quite some time since your last update. :)
Title: Chapter 3 22 Apr 2007 12:38 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool story!Hope you can update soon! Looking forward to it!
Title: Chapter 3 06 Feb 2007 12:44 am
Reviewer: nitaice (Anonymous) [Report This]
    soooooooo cool

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Chapter 3 04 Feb 2007 4:10 pm
Reviewer: dreamwood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have a great story that is exceptionally well-written. I keep coming back to re-read it. I can't wait to see Harry taking care of little Severus!Please update again soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks :) I'm working on the next chapters, I have some ideas and a few things written, but I'm not happy with them so that's why there hasn't been an update.

    I'm also going a bit slow since I'm trying to get the muses to return so I can finish my other stories. Apprentice in particular.

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jan 2007 8:31 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Will you please update this story?

    *Anna*

    Author's Response: I'm working on it. I have some things written, but I'm not happy with them so I'm going to wait a bit until I have the chapter the way I want it.
Title: Chapter 1 03 Jan 2007 1:33 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you're an author who gets straight to the point (my favourite strategy in writing). i like it.

    it's such a disappointment that Snape never met the Dursleys in the books (yes, i suppose there is hope yet, but it is only slim) because the situation is always so delightfully entertaining to read: the Bane of Harry's Life Hogwarts version (snape) meets the Bane of Harry's Life holiday version (the Dursleys).

    And seeing how the Dursleys despise magic, and Snape despises Muggles (or at the very least probably has significant prejudices about them) the only outcome can be dramatic fireworks. i love it.

    you could edit your work a bit and polish up your writing, but the plot and pace are well-done.


    Author's Response:

    Thanks :) I'm glad you like it.

    On my work I don't have an editor or a beta reader because my chapters come rather sporadically. I use mostly MSWord to correct grammar and spelling although I consult some reference books I have if I'm too much in doubt.

    I would really appreciate any suggestions into correcting my work, as English is not my native language and I only get to practice it while reading (books, magazines, and fanfiction) or writing fanfiction.


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