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Reviews For Another Chance At Childhood
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm working on the next chapters, I have some ideas and a few things written, but I'm not happy with them so that's why there hasn't been an update. I'm also going a bit slow since I'm trying to get the muses to return so I can finish my other stories. Apprentice in particular.
*Anna* Author's Response: I'm working on it. I have some things written, but I'm not happy with them so I'm going to wait a bit until I have the chapter the way I want it.
it's such a disappointment that Snape never met the Dursleys in the books (yes, i suppose there is hope yet, but it is only slim) because the situation is always so delightfully entertaining to read: the Bane of Harry's Life Hogwarts version (snape) meets the Bane of Harry's Life holiday version (the Dursleys). And seeing how the Dursleys despise magic, and Snape despises Muggles (or at the very least probably has significant prejudices about them) the only outcome can be dramatic fireworks. i love it. you could edit your work a bit and polish up your writing, but the plot and pace are well-done. Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you like it. On my work I don't have an editor or a beta reader because my chapters come rather sporadically. I use mostly MSWord to correct grammar and spelling although I consult some reference books I have if I'm too much in doubt. I would really appreciate any suggestions into correcting my work, as English is not my native language and I only get to practice it while reading (books, magazines, and fanfiction) or writing fanfiction. |
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