This is a really cool story, and I can't wait to see where it goes. A little nit-picking, though. Severus says "Not even a full year passed between my rejection of her and her murder", but Harry was a year and three months old when Lily was murdured; if not even a year had passed, Harry would have already been born by the time Severus rejected Lily. Other than that, everything is cool, and like I said I can't wait to read more. Kudos!
Author's Response: Yikes ... thanks for pointing it out. I don't know what I was thinking but I'll go back and fix it. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared
| 15 Jul 2006 7:26 am
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| Reviewer: gizmama (Signed)
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Wonderful! Wonderful! I can't wait for the next update! Please hurry!
Author's Response: I'll try, I really will. Thanks for your kind words!
| Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared
| 15 Jul 2006 4:42 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed)
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I'm glad you're continuing this story. You write so well. Hope you can update this quickly -- but I have to admit, I'm also hoping you'll get back to Savior soon -- so take your pick, I love them both.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is so sweet of you to say. I will try to update both stories soon.
| Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared
| 15 Jul 2006 4:37 am
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| Reviewer: Nafs (Anonymous)
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I love all your stories, but this one is definitely my favourite. As much as I want more updates nownownow, I'm glad you take time with it, since you come out with such beautiful, rich prose.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I fell in love with this story the moment I read it; I'm so glad that Remus decided that you needed to update.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so flattered to hear you say that you love it. I'll talk to Remus and see what he can do for another update, 'kay? :)
| Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared
| 15 Jul 2006 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: Bratling (Signed)
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I love this story. Actually, since a body was never found, I'm really hoping that it turns out that Harry, somehow, survived. However, if we're trying to stick closely to canon except for the Severitus aspect, I do have one gripe. Harry was fifteen months old when Lily and James died, and if Severus didn't know she was pregnant, she would've had to have been in the first trimester, which means that it had to have been at least a year and a half, if not a little more, from the time she left Sev until she was murdered.
Author's Response: You are quite right and thank you for pointing that out ... (hiding all pretense at math skills) ... yes, well, you will note that I have not put a warning for character death so do continue hoping. :)
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