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Title: Chapter 4: Journal 03 Mar 2007 7:07 pm
Reviewer: miss june (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, i cried reading this. I read a lot of fan-fic, and i have never cried before. you must update often. Please update often.
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 21 Feb 2007 5:41 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    "He was still shocked by the nerve of that chit, suggesting that his Harry was still alive, disturbing the quiet acceptance and tranquility that had cradled Severus. He had been safe, enclosed in a bubble of grief, separate from the rest of the world."

    Perfect, perfect line. I thought there might be some sort of way that Hermione would search for Harry. She just doesn't seem the sort to give up so easily. Now that she has a blood relation, that should make things easier; provided she can talk Snape into giving her some of his blood, or whatever it is that the spell requires.

    I did not mention this before, but it does appear that there is some very subtle chemistry here between Snape and Hermione, making me wonder if there is a pairing in their future. They seem to touch one another more often than before, although that could certainly be due to grief; and Snape mentions at least once or twice that she reminds him of Lily in some ways.

    Snape had to know that nothing short of suicidal curiosity could have made Harry approach him, considering their horrible rapport up until that point. Poor Harry, though, knowing this and feeling unable to do anything about it!

    As usual, you have earned my overwhelming respect as an author. Though it's not as good as yours, you should read my story sometime! ;)

    -K
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 18 Feb 2007 12:31 pm
Reviewer: Elysia_Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it. Very excited to see where this is headed. Love Snape and the slippers- Hermione might have been able to keep a straight face but I was smirking! Update soon! Be sure to email me when you do elysia.snape@gmail.com
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 30 Jan 2007 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Banner (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. That premise has sucked me in, and now I'm absorbed.
    More more more.
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 22 Jan 2007 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide Chequ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Keep it coming! This story is an amazing Snape piece and I totally love it!!!! Not many fics delve this deep into his thoughts on the relationship thing. They all show his actions after he discovers that Harry is his son, but this is deeper. I love it! Great job. =)(=.
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 15 Jan 2007 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Loxodontamagica (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love this ! It's dark, but I have hope for a reunion at some point...?

    Update soon!

Title: Chapter 4: Journal 25 Nov 2006 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am truly haunted now................ wish I had more.  You are going to update soon right?  Please hurry and do so immediately if not sooner.  This is really good and in need of  completion, or are you just trying to kill me from the suspense?  PLease update soon.  Thanks
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 19 Oct 2006 10:50 pm
Reviewer: Debs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, I love the story, you dont update very often but when you do its great. It seems like Harry Potter is not alive, but on the summary there is an indication that he is. Is he or isint he? lol confusing. could my questions be asnwersed? if so please email me at Pottersnapefan @ hotmail . com. thanks so much goodbye
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 19 Oct 2006 12:10 am
Reviewer: DarkHeronatDusk (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Brava! What an emotionally wrenching beginning. My eyes burn from the effect your story caused. The tumultuous conflict and nostalgic grief couple to form a beautiful personification of Severus Snape. Please do not abandon this fic, I think you have an excellent start, not to metion completely different from any other fic I have read.

Title: Chapter 4: Journal 18 Oct 2006 6:12 pm
Reviewer: ivanova (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This is a very moving story.  I love your portrayal of all of the characters and I love that it focuses almost solely on Snape.  You are doing a wonderful job.  Please post more as soon as possible.  The last update was a painful wait...

    Thank You,
    Ivanova 


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