Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Prologue: Testament 30 Oct 2006 6:02 am
Reviewer: hercat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My favourite of your stories on this site.  Bitter but sweet as well.  I have to wonder though, what about the line "Mr. Potter, our new celeberty"?
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 19 Oct 2006 10:50 pm
Reviewer: Debs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, I love the story, you dont update very often but when you do its great. It seems like Harry Potter is not alive, but on the summary there is an indication that he is. Is he or isint he? lol confusing. could my questions be asnwersed? if so please email me at Pottersnapefan @ hotmail . com. thanks so much goodbye
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 19 Oct 2006 12:10 am
Reviewer: DarkHeronatDusk (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Brava! What an emotionally wrenching beginning. My eyes burn from the effect your story caused. The tumultuous conflict and nostalgic grief couple to form a beautiful personification of Severus Snape. Please do not abandon this fic, I think you have an excellent start, not to metion completely different from any other fic I have read.

Title: Chapter 4: Journal 18 Oct 2006 6:12 pm
Reviewer: ivanova (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This is a very moving story.  I love your portrayal of all of the characters and I love that it focuses almost solely on Snape.  You are doing a wonderful job.  Please post more as soon as possible.  The last update was a painful wait...

    Thank You,
    Ivanova 

Title: Chapter 4: Journal 11 Oct 2006 5:22 am
Reviewer: reseh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a very moving story so far, as Severus does a lot of soul searching. I look forward to future updates.
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 11 Oct 2006 1:41 am
Reviewer: Rezallia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    ::sobs::  Awwwww.... What's wrong with everyone in the world?!?!  I think you did a pretty good job with Harry's journal and Snape's reaction-- I was waiting (with baited breath) for this, and you didn't disappoint me!  Right-o.  You are just awesome!  :)

Title: Chapter 4: Journal 10 Oct 2006 12:32 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    omg... wow
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 09 Oct 2006 9:46 pm
Reviewer: ClownFish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just finished reading all the chapters posted so far.  What an emotional treat.  Snape's gradual discovery of his son and his love for him were extremely well written.  The realiziation wasn't sudden and so full of regret!  Waiting for more.
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 09 Oct 2006 12:26 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sniff, poor Snape.  Great chapter
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 09 Oct 2006 12:02 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    So good.  It's just painful to read Harry's journal.  You write the most poignantly painful stories.  Love 'em.

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