Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 4: Journal 08 Oct 2006 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that's just heartbreaking.  I do wish that Severus had listened to what Hermione had to say.  Hmm... could they use one of the Dursleys?  This is currently one of my favorite Severituses.  Please, update again soon.  (I'd like more of Savior, too!)
Title: Chapter 4: Journal 08 Oct 2006 11:03 pm
Reviewer: gem (Anonymous) [Report This]
     this is wonderfull i can't wait until you update
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 28 Sep 2006 3:53 am
Reviewer: Kathy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh good grief, this is one of the most moving stories in the Severus as father genre that I've ever read. When will you update?
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 23 Sep 2006 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Rezallia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is awesome-- you need to update! 
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 07 Sep 2006 3:22 pm
Reviewer: Rhiannon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Briliant! Hope to read more soon!
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 01 Aug 2006 7:57 pm
Reviewer: Candy_Stick (Anonymous) [Report This]

    OMG!! You have become one of my favourite authors! Your writing is amazing and you keep away from OOC and harry-is-snape's-son-they-love-each-other-and-become-the-perfect-family. Like poppy and memory comes second in my list of favourite stories and 1st is Savior. I can't wait to see how this story developes. I bet Harry isn't dead and when Severus opens Harry journal it tells him where he is or something like that.

    You are an excellent writer and I can't wait to read more.

Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 24 Jul 2006 9:15 pm
Reviewer: bluesparrow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ack!  Talk about a cliffhanger!  I think what I enjoy most about this story is the quality of your writing.  I can feel the box under my fingers, feel the quietness of Snape's obsession with it.  I do wonder if there is a 'reason' behind all the drinking?  It does make me feel a bit uncomfortable--which is not a bad thing.  Anyway, like everyone else here, looking forward to an update.
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 21 Jul 2006 6:41 am
Reviewer: Ivanova (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an excellent story so far.  For some unknown reason I just love "Snape is Harry's father" stories :-)  Your story takes a slight twist on the theme, after death, and I find it quite intriguing.  Please post more as soon as possible.  Thank you kindly.


    Author's Response: Thank you - I'll try to not make you wait too long. :)
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 17 Jul 2006 3:45 am
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hermione was waaaaaay overwritten. Like many fics, it doesn't seem like she should really be in the story, just that the author's thinking, "Well, Hermione always has to be doing something important, so I have to fit her into this scene somehow." Especially in the scene with Lupin; I think it would have been more effective as just a scene between him and Snape. That was the most jarring thing for me- not that Snape was suddenly not so set against Harry, but that Hermione was becoming so involved in his life. That's what really made him seem unSnapelike. As for the Harry part, that was getting quite interesting, with all the things Snape was discovering. There's a good "ooo, what's going to happen next?" vibe to it.


    Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like Hermione ... I don't see her as being "so involved in his life" but rather just as pursuing her natural curiosity as to the nature of the bequest that her best friend left him. She isn't there for no reason ... I'm going to need her later so I hope you can bear with her for now.
Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Shared 16 Jul 2006 12:15 am
Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please update soon its been so long since you updated!!

    Author's Response: Sorry ... I didn't mean to take so long, honestly. I'll try to write more often.

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