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Reviews For Savior
Author's Response: Don't worry, this is definitely going to focus on Snape and Harry. Draco's just there to provide Harry with the help that Snape can't ... forcefeed him at meal times and such. Yes, he has his own issues to work out and Severus will be trying to help with that, but I'm not really that interested in Draco and his issues.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you've enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Your style is fluid, your plot is flowing nicely and your evil Snape is wonderful!!! Finally, this is what an abused child would look and act like. Except at the level of abuse you put him at, he would never have survived to become a happy, healthy (emotionally) adult. I wonder if he can be saved in your AU. I look forward to finding out! Author's Response: I am often very puzzled by the amount of abuse that authors will put Harry through and then they have him share a few hugs with someone or go through a few obligatory counselling sessions before riding off into the happily ever after. I don't think it's anywhere near that simple and I'm not sure that my Harry can be saved.
Please do continue it, at least a little bit further. You are an excellent writer, and it's not often that I find a story like yours that I truly enjoy and would look forward to reading more of. I would especially enjoy seeing how Harry develops in Slytherin. It would be wonderful to see how he becomes more confident, independent and powerful, and also what kind of a part Draco plays in his life too. Please continue! Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words and encouragement. I'm not really sure what role Draco will play yet, so if you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them.
Great start I really like this fic so far! Update soon! ~Jan Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks - hope you enjoy the rest of my story.
Author's Response: I'm writing and updating as fast as I can. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Draco does make a convenient little plot device, doesn't he? It's a pity that he won't go back into the plot device box when I'm done with him ... he keeps popping back up! Admin edit: Jan - Please don't list your e-mail in a review. There's no protection on the site for it. Thanks. :)
He is so shy..... poor litle thing..... I`m looking forward to your next update Author's Response: Thank you! |
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