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Title: Chapter 5 05 Jun 2006 11:20 am
Reviewer: Dracofan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I personally like a redeemed Draco. You can't please everyone. Write what you want to write. Obviously, I'm biased here; but I never would ask someone who wrote Draco as a villian or just an SOB to change their story. To other readers: There are thousands of HP stories out there. If you have specific tastes, it can almost certainly be found. If not, write it yourself. Really, the more stories the better whatever they are.

    Author's Response:

    It is a tricky question and there are arguments that go both ways. I decided that Draco was more interesting than any of the other Slytherin boys in that year and that Harry needed a friend ... thus Draco. I'm not certain that he is completely reformed but we all have our lapses, don't we?

    Thanks for the review, I'm glad to hear your opinion on the question. 

Title: Chapter 5 05 Jun 2006 1:48 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have made another major change from the original story line:  Harry might have been sorted into Ravenclaw???  I can't wait to hear that story!  I'm enjoying the story very much and avidly wait for each update.  Severus is going to drive himself crazy with his internal boxing match over Harry.  You didn't mention Harry reacting to Quirrell, so the question is how much you are using from canon.  Is Quirrell helping Voldemort in this universe?  If so, will Harry need Ron and Herm., or will you have an alternate path to the Philosophers Stone plot thread?

    Author's Response:

    Yes, the conversation Harry had with the Sorting Hat will make an (eventual) reappearance, although everything seems to be taking 2-3 chapters longer than I want it to take.

    There will be some canon worked into the story line and the Philosopher's Stone will definitely play a major role, but I'm also going to discard any bits of canon that I don't want to work in. 

Title: Chapter 5 04 Jun 2006 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Daybreaq (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh Snapey! You wouldn't be starting to enjoy the Potter boy's company would you? No ... NO!!! It's revenge, REVENGE!!! And he is a Slytherin and it's your job to look out for Slytherins. You have to make sure he eats and he's moderately decent in potions so why shouldn't he help you out making those ordinary infirmary potions. And it is important all Slytherins succeed. Yeah that's all it's about ... yeah.

    Keep telling yourself that Snapey! Hee! ;)

    I really do love your Snape! :)

     



    Author's Response: Hehe, exactly! Poor Snape, he's trying to be all logical and yet he's deluding himself.
Title: Chapter 5 04 Jun 2006 5:51 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't review regularly anymore like I should, so I'm not quite sure when the last time I wrote one for you.  Let me start that I think the way your taking this is great!  I mean it's really original and I just lvoe that fact.  And it's IC which is even better.  From what I'm understand from chapter 5, Snape's changing directions with how he feels about Harry, but he didn't do it over night which is how many people write that part out, and Snape not in a million years would change directions like that.  I'm curious as to how  Draco and Harry's friendship will turn out after a while and of course Snape (cause I love him)  and Harry's "relationship"    Your doing a wonderful job. please continue. :D  (cause I am addicted) 

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review, I do appreciate it.

    Yes, Snape is going to be changing fairly slowly and with a lot of occasional set-backs. I feel it's more natural that way.  

Title: Chapter 5 04 Jun 2006 7:48 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]

    Awwwww I love it! You've done a marvelous job of making Snape realistically softer, a feat which has been almost impossible for other authors. Please update soon.



    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you think he's realistic! I do hate it when he gets all OOC as soon as he learns about Harry's abuse ... or stories that just start out with all of the extent of the abuse being revealed at once.

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