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Reviews For Savior
Love that line.
Ut-Ho this cannot bode well for either Harry or Snape. The boy will surely break down fully and I don't know if Sev will realize his mistake. I also don't think that Harry will trust him so easily again at all. Keep up the good work. Author's Response: Hope this next chapter makes everything better... all is not lost. :)
This is a really wonderful story! i expecially like this sort of angsting and mean Severus, the longer the anguish takes the better ;) I'm so sad there is no more for me to read :( Please post another chappie soon, I beg you! Your impatient reader. Author's Response: Hope this is soon enough, although this chapter cuts back a bit on the angst. There has to be a reprieve before it increases, right?
OMG!! I can't wait to find out what going to happen between Severus and Harry now! Still totally loving this story, can't wait for an update. Hope we don't have to wait too long! Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I hope you like the next chapter.
Author's Response: You know what they say about paranoia ... wait, no, Harry isn't out to get Snape... oh well, sayings like that are often wrong anyways. Glad you're enjoying it, hope you like the next chapter.
~Jan Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is up, hope you like it.
Excellent chapter! I love the way you present the characters, you seem to be able to give them a dimension of life that not even J.K herself could. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this story and where you want to take it. Please update as often as possible. Gryffyn
Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment - thanks! I'm trying to update as often as I can. Hope you like the next chapter.
I had another comment. It seems like Snape has an adult version of a similar problem as Harry. Harry reacts to certain "stimuli" in the way he learned to react growing up on Privet Drive. Snape is doing something a bit similar, only from the perspective of an adult. So when Harry asks Snape about his parents, Snape reacts as though someone is once again trying to injure him.
Perhaps that not where you meant to go with this, but it does seem to come out. Author's Response: Exactly, it was a bit of a knee-jerk response that Snape didn't even think about.
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