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Title: Chapter 11 05 Aug 2006 6:24 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I usually skip over AN's, but for some reason I read yours today.  Yes, do what you have to to stay in grad school.  It will last much longer than the fleeting joy you bring with your Fanfic.  Just don't forget about it.  You have an insight into a very troubled Snape that is fascinating.  You are in the process of teaching him to be human in your story.  I found his reaction to Harry's healing in the last chapter to be so far beyond realistic that I was wondering what was going on.  But your explanation of his descent into bitter memory and the insight given by the Bloody Baron were incredible!  Now you have him wallowing in self hatred over the words of Narcissa and his loss of trust from Harry.  I'm hooked.  I, too, have been having a busy life and reading two chapters was quite a treat.  Maybe during your studies you could jot down the occasional idea.  I'll keep a lookout for your return.
Title: Chapter 11 05 Aug 2006 2:56 am
Reviewer: bluesparrow (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I very much appreciate your creativity.  I feel that Snape is an open character (just waiting to be exploited ;) and I love the depth you have given him.  The conversations that the Baron and Narcissa had with him, and his subsequent self examination, really make for an interesting story.

    On a more base note, I hope Snape gets sufficiently punished for this!  I think Harry might 'forgive', but that kind of soul-wounding is almost impossible to surmount.  I look forward to seeing what you do with this.

     PS.  I hope school goes well...of course we can wait!

Title: Chapter 11 04 Aug 2006 8:43 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really getting good. I like how you have Harry different, but still aspects of him cannon self.
Title: Chapter 11 04 Aug 2006 2:11 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chappy, I like the way you went with this, thoroughly enjoyed it, I did! I am rather curious how things will pan out with D and N, though I must admit I'd like to see Sev primarily taking care of Harry, with those two slightly less involved. Either way, I loved the chapter and you take care of your RL first, school is more important!
Title: Chapter 11 04 Aug 2006 9:25 am
Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) [Report This]

    I do not know if my words will be able to convince you, but I thought that this chapter was fantastic! You have such a way of keeping with the right emotions in each scene. I am honestly glad that Severus seems to be recognizing what his plotting has cost him. Whether it has truly opened his eyes will remain to be seen.  Keep up the great work. I know that August is a busy month for you and I am sad that there will be fewer updates, I look forward to what you do post both here and Like Poppy and Memory.

    May your muses be many and constant,

    Gryff 

Title: Chapter 11 04 Aug 2006 2:01 am
Reviewer: mongerel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    mmmm.... you angst so GOOD. i can't wait to read the resolution of this little debacle.
Title: Chapter 11 03 Aug 2006 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff* this is so *sniff* deprssing *sniff* *sniff* but really good *sniff* i really need a tisue!
Title: Chapter 11 03 Aug 2006 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Krazey_Forever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well that was angsty. In the beginning I was going 'hell yeah' ... I've never liked Narcissa but in your story she's so ... fierce! Loved the telling off Snape got and of course I shall TRY to be patient for another update.
Title: Chapter 11 03 Aug 2006 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow this chapter almost made me cry! Good job. Please update soon!
Title: Chapter 11 03 Aug 2006 8:28 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this chapter is beautiful beyond words. The way Severus just aches over what he realizes that he has lost. It's perfect.

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