Oh I so badly want you to update this fic, it's just so gorgeous and Snape's just coming around now... please?
Then again, I realise how demanding life can be and hiw sparse inspiration and motivation can get.
You're writing this so well, much like your other fics - you arent rushing it and it's all relevant to the storyline. I have to say, I love your Narcissa, it's so nice that she's a real, rounded character and not the prissy bit of stone most people write her as. And that she's being the mum Harry never had. Not to mention, you actually helped clear something up for me when the Baron spoke to Sev last chapter about how Harry's parents would have rejoiced and been happy, how where they are, they're incapable of negativity - thank you for that ^-^
Good luck with everything you're doing, hope life's being kind ^^
have fun x
Oooof I love this!
Hope you update soon!
Nice Narcissa is amazing!
| Title: Chapter 12
| 05 Oct 2008 4:00 am
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| Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous)
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Wow .. come on please finish this is a really good story please :)
| Title: Chapter 12
| 09 Jun 2008 12:33 am
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| Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy13 (Anonymous)
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I REALLY WANT TO READ THE END OF THIS!!!
i have to say this is quite original and not like any other fan fic i've read, i hope sev has given up on his revenge though and regains harry's trust so they can move forward with him mentoring harry.
I know i come to the story a bit late, but it has been well worth every moment I've spent at the computer, utterly enthralled.
I know you worry that perhaps you've strayed OOC with your characters, but I'd like to reassure you that, given even the small initial changes you made in canon to act as a base for the story, the characters' reactions are entirely appropriate and extraordinarily well thought out. The Harry you portray may not be the same Harry JKR wrote, but the two have different histories and in all honesty, I've often felt that her characters often lacked a certain realism that is far more evident in your development of them.
I'm particulary impressed with your portrayal of Severus. His is such a complex and difficult mind to understand, but I've been most pleased with his thought processes and reactions. :smile: Even in the books it's obvious he cares more than he lets show, whatever his reasons (and rationalizations) may be. His evolution throughout this story did not at any point give me pause or leave me momentarily shocked out of the flow of the story. I can easily see how the last chapter must have been extremely difficult to write as in no way did Rowling ever put him in such a situation as to reveal this side of his character, but I think that anyone with even a spark of decency would find himself utterly appalled to realize what a terrifically destructive effect they'd have on an already damaged child.
The whole plot is simply brilliant, the characters vivid, and (joy of all joys!) your spelling and grammar are beyond reproach! Should you ever have the time or inclination to continue with this story, I will no doubt be one of the many celebrating, but even as is, it is a marvelous piece of work that you should be incredibly proud of. Don't doubt yourself so...your instincts and insight are marvelous. Thank you for all of the effort and heart you have put into this...
~Monica
Great story! Severus finally seems to have twigged to what everyone was trying to get him to realise...
But...please update?
| Title: Chapter 12
| 16 Nov 2007 6:35 am
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| Reviewer: salem (Anonymous)
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AWESOME! Very believeable, and I love the way snape interacts with people.
Oh! I do wish you were still updating this fic. Are you? Please? Please??
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