Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 7:31 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry.  Please, more soon!


    Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 6:44 am
Reviewer: Ariana (Anonymous) [Report This]
     This is a wonderful beginning! I particularly enjoyed how you laid the foundations for why Severus is going to help Harry. Often in fanfic he suddenly feels sorry for him or realises that he was mistaken about Harry being his father's son. The idea of vengence is fairly undeveloped, though, and very Snapish! I also liked how frustrated Severus was with Harry... he's going to help him, but he's not going to become sweetness and light! I can't wait to see if you go further with this and how their relationship grows. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm tired of the sudden switch in Snape's personality that you often see in stories as well. There's no way that people change that fast ... I do think that his personality will be evolving a little, because he's definitely not a static character, but it will hopefully be slow enough to be realistic.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 6:20 am
Reviewer: Fairycatcher1 (Signed) [Report This]
    CONTINUE!!!!! I LOVE IT!


    Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 5:34 am
Reviewer: Nafs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that certainly was an interesting vignette. I'd like to see it continued, if you have a clear idea of all the ways that the Dursleys abused Harry and how Snape will gain his trust, also if he'd have to go back.  *grin* I'm also a big fan of vengeance-against-the-Dursleys scenes, but that's just me


    Author's Response: I think that vengeance against the Potters might just evolve into vengeance against the Dursleys ... eventually. You'll have to wait for it!
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 5:31 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh you just have to continue.  First chapter and you have me hooked, which most authors can't do.   Snape is so IC it's amazing, honestly...just wonderful. waiting for more. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, I tried hard to keep Snape IC. Do let me know if he falls out of character, won't you?
Title: Chapter 1 24 Apr 2006 5:12 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    Good first chapter. I haven't read many like it - it sounds very original. I look forward to seeing more

    Keep writing please!



    Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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