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Title: Chapter 11 23 Aug 2006 5:18 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *sniff*  This is the most touching story I've read on this site.  I hope you update it soon.  I really hope that Severus is able to reconnect with both Harry and Draco and that he apologizes sincerely, or failing that that both boys are able to forgive him.  I really hope that Narcissa is able to take partial custody of Harry, I think that she would do a world of good for him.  This chapter was so touching and full of emotion.  You've made Harry not just an abused little boy but a boy who is longing for love and you don't overdo his reactions.  Everything is very believable.  I can't wait for the next part.
Title: Chapter 11 20 Aug 2006 11:50 am
Reviewer: A.J. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is truly a brilliant piece of work. The accuracy of the characters's personality, going by the roles you've given them, really hits home. I've read many stories where Harry is abused and Severus gains his trust in a week. That is rediculous, and unrealistic. This story, however, has captured both the canon character traits, as well as adding a little personality to fit the story, and woven a believable and brilliant novel.
Title: Chapter 11 12 Aug 2006 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, really awesome story. Update next chapter soon; this is one of my favorites!
Title: Chapter 11 11 Aug 2006 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked this story, how will you reconsile them?
Title: Chapter 11 10 Aug 2006 4:54 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sigh, he's fine. Maybe not back trusting Severus that much but still fine. I feel sorry for Severus though I understand he deserves it all. Well, I feel sorry for both of them. Thanks not stopping in bad situation if you won't be able to write for month or so... Write when you will have some time I'll be waiting here!
Title: Chapter 11 09 Aug 2006 1:09 am
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So far, I had sob unruly and most likely been through a box of tissues, a very red nose and eyes while reading this story. I will be looking forward for more excellent chapters to come
Title: Chapter 11 05 Aug 2006 6:24 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I usually skip over AN's, but for some reason I read yours today.  Yes, do what you have to to stay in grad school.  It will last much longer than the fleeting joy you bring with your Fanfic.  Just don't forget about it.  You have an insight into a very troubled Snape that is fascinating.  You are in the process of teaching him to be human in your story.  I found his reaction to Harry's healing in the last chapter to be so far beyond realistic that I was wondering what was going on.  But your explanation of his descent into bitter memory and the insight given by the Bloody Baron were incredible!  Now you have him wallowing in self hatred over the words of Narcissa and his loss of trust from Harry.  I'm hooked.  I, too, have been having a busy life and reading two chapters was quite a treat.  Maybe during your studies you could jot down the occasional idea.  I'll keep a lookout for your return.
Title: Chapter 11 05 Aug 2006 2:56 am
Reviewer: bluesparrow (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I very much appreciate your creativity.  I feel that Snape is an open character (just waiting to be exploited ;) and I love the depth you have given him.  The conversations that the Baron and Narcissa had with him, and his subsequent self examination, really make for an interesting story.

    On a more base note, I hope Snape gets sufficiently punished for this!  I think Harry might 'forgive', but that kind of soul-wounding is almost impossible to surmount.  I look forward to seeing what you do with this.

     PS.  I hope school goes well...of course we can wait!

Title: Chapter 11 04 Aug 2006 8:43 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really getting good. I like how you have Harry different, but still aspects of him cannon self.
Title: Chapter 10 04 Aug 2006 8:30 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Okay, I need more!

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