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Title: Slytherin Segregation 08 Jun 2006 4:49 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry; it's tough to always be the hero.  No one ever appreciates him standing up for truth, justice, and the Hogwartsian way.  Darn troublemakers.


    Author's Response: Isn't just? He's more of the reluctant(-ish) hero here. Kind of. Not really. But still lol. Just wait, the Hogwartsian way will ... eh, who am I kidding? I'm not going to tell you lol. Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Slytherin Segregation 07 Jun 2006 8:06 pm
Reviewer: aliceandjasper (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that chapter was really good. I like were the story is headed and that Harry has the chance to unite the houses. Please update soon. I want to see the reaction of the other Gryffindors

    Author's Response: I'm so pleased, thank you! I was really worried that I was going in a direction that only I would want it to go. And my imagination being as it is, it would most likely involve some sort of fantasy creature (preferably a hybrid of vampires and dragons) and would most likely not appeal to anyone else.  Mwahaha. You'll see!
Title: Slytherin Segregation 07 Jun 2006 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Wow oh wow. I knew that it was going to start to get rough but wow. A riot in Hogsmead? Poor litte Slytherins. And what Towler said must hurt, traitor indeed. He's the one who's a traitor to his house! I am afriad that it's going to get a lot worse too. : At least Harry finally tried to get them to stop, and as usual it got him into trouble. Poor Harry. I loved your characterization of Snape in this chapter, how he was sulking and how Harry saw him and the Slytherins with McGonagall was hilarious! Great job! :)

    Author's Response: I've counted four wow's lol. Thanks for the incredible review! I really wasn't sure about this chapter so you can imagine how chuffed I am ^_^
Title: We Founders Three 24 May 2006 7:51 am
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooo, intrigue! I quite liked this chapter; it's nice to see the plots afoot. Looking forward to your next update

    Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ I think that's one of my major problems ... I take a couple of chapters to really get into the plot. Ah well. I'm working on it. I'll update as soon as I can!
Title: We Founders Three 23 May 2006 12:21 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! I've never seen such a scene, as the aurors dragging Snape into his own classroom! Oh man. I am so glad that Harry, Hermione and Ron stood up in that classroom though, even if it was for different reasons (Ron). I liked how they were all together. I do like how strong Snape was, even though he was injured and being dragged into his own classroom... very in character and it makes me admire him. I wonder what the aurors wanted, maybe a potion or hidden potion ingredient? I was worried thatthe aurors were going to plan to make an example of one of the students, a Slytherin student to get Snape to talk. I'm glad that it didn't get that far. Hooray for Dumbledore! Thanks for sharing, keep writing! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks bunches ^_^ And now you've given me an idea, I'll have to use it in future chapter *insert cackle*
Title: Educational Decree Number Ten 20 May 2006 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Mila (Signed) [Report This]

    *does the happy dance*
    Yay! Someone responded to my challenge.
    *hugs*
    I think this is going awesomely so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

    ~ Mila



    Author's Response:

    Hey! *joins in* Thanks very much! Hope it has everything you'd ever intended ^_^

Title: Educational Decree Number Ten 15 May 2006 5:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Wha-? What is Umbridge thinking!? Oh man. Oh wow, this is going to be BAD for Hogwarts, bad for the Slytherin students. And I caught that the Slytherin faculty was going to be placed under this decree as well. What an insult to Snape! How will he take it? Wow. Awesome story.

    I really loved how Poppy threatened to box Harry's ears, and I loved how mothering Mrs. Weasley was. Hermione carries dead mice in her pockets? Ew! LOL. Everyone's in character and I enjoy the characterization of Hermione and Ron. You are doing a really good job! I just can't wait to see how Snape's taking it, what the school is going to be like and what Harry notices. More please! :)



    Author's Response: lol I know! I love playing around with Snape's pride. *insert evil laugh here*. Thanks very much! I don't think anything I've ever written has been called 'awesome' before. Champagne!
Title: Melting Fudge 15 May 2006 4:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice beginning! :) Really great setup, action and pace. I like this version of events a lot and the details you used to structure it were done well. It made it seem new. I am very interested in this story premise and can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks bunches! I'm glad you thought so ^_^ Plus, it's you, One of the people I most admire in this genre! Yey!
Title: Educational Decree Number Ten 14 May 2006 7:04 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm... an interesting turn of events.  I liked this chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try and update as soon as I can.
Title: Educational Decree Number Ten 13 May 2006 10:03 pm
Reviewer: gommeke (Anonymous) [Report This]

    keep writing please



    Author's Response: Will do! Thanks for the review!

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