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Title: Chapter One: Harry's Dilemma	09 May 2007 10:35 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed)	[Report This]

Nice start to the story. I get hints that the explanation is not as simple as it seems on the surface. Poor Harry's cupboard was a little creepy, but I'm glad that we aren't going to get terribly beaten!Harry in this story.

Title: Chapter One: Harry's Dilemma	12 Mar 2007 1:35 pm
Reviewer: Nalli (Anonymous)	[Report This]

Pretty strong beginning - you seem to get more into your stride as you go along. It was good how you brought up past treatment of Harry; I imagine that will be very useful later in a father/son bonding or comparison of some sort - or you might do something else completely different and surprise us all! Whatever it is I can't wait.

Title: Chapter One: Harry's Dilemma	12 May 2006 4:10 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous)	[Report This]

WOW! This is absolutly FANTASTIC! I dont think you should change Harry TO drasticly though, because remember no one really looks like a perfect blend between there parents. Other wise they wouldn't be unique. There is something distinct about everyone.

I love the Harry angst! Please can we see some more? UPDATE SOON!

~Jan

Author's Response: Thank-you, and, no, Harry won't be changing too drastically. He is only changed enough to not be recognizable as Harry Potter (except for his eyes and scar), but not enough to where anyone would look at him and instantly say, "Snape!" He's gained some of Lilly's features as well.

Title: Chapter One: Harry's Dilemma	11 May 2006 10:07 am
Reviewer: ph6fingeredman (Anonymous)	[Report This]

Oooh! Cool. I like the beginning. I hope to see more of this. I also like that he is getting a crooked nose; too often serveritus!Harry will end up looking like idealized!fanon!Snape. So bravo(a?).