| Title: Chapter Six: Through Eyes of Shrouded Black
| 13 Jun 2006 5:31 pm
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| Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous)
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Well, I guess I was not clever enough to find your tips but I will review anyhow. But after all not my first language so that was not so surprise. Sigh, he got away from it at least for moment. But I guess, wrong I know that Snape won't forget to renew his try getting know about Harry's past via the occlumency. But on the other hand he might start to realize that not everything is fine with Harry from his memories. I don't think that Harry even wants to remember his early memories as they are so bad and easiest thing to do with them is get himself to forget them all and live up his reputation as Harry Potter. You're going to redo some parts of your story... Well, do that but please go on with the story so well. Hoping for new chappy soon!
| Title: Chapter Six: Through Eyes of Shrouded Black
| 11 Jun 2006 8:49 am
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| Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous)
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AWesome chapter! Can't wait for another update!!!!!!
| Title: Chapter Six: Through Eyes of Shrouded Black
| 10 Jun 2006 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Ellie (Signed)
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Wonderful! What can I say... this chapter is really good. Like the others. :P
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