| Title: Chapter Thirteen: Exploding Snap
| 12 Mar 2007 1:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Nalli (Anonymous)
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I've alreay read all fourteen chapters, and I only reviewed the last one, but I've decided I should go back and review you're other ones (or at least some). Miss June is right, you don't get enough reviews, and I'm really willing to take the time to encourage you to write more, because your writing and this story is worth it. I love the way we're kept hanging with regards to the Harry/Snape confrontation, and your characterisation of Snape is great. Your dialogue is fast paced and real, and the detail in the potion making scenes is fab. Really keep it up, and I hope this helps motivate!
| Title: Chapter Thirteen: Exploding Snap
| 18 Dec 2006 10:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous)
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Brilliant! I LOL at the Potions' scene!
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