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Reviews For I capture the castle
I love this story, although you are kinda making Harry seem scatterbrained. Still it's good. Snape has stayed a bastard and i like that he has only shown brief moments of being nice. I will try to comment on every chapter from now on. You dont seem to get enough reviews. Just don't stop updating. I hate it when i get into a really good FF and idiots stop writing them! But you seem smart so i know you woulden' t do that to me. Would you?
Oh, this was great! I LOL at the kitchen scene with all the bad food. And then the shopping scene was so funny. Harry played his part so well, too well, but I loved it! I thought for sure Snape would be harder on him, but it was great all the same. It will an interesting holiday for them! Great job, update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, he's sort of waiting as it is, because I wanted to save the big confrontation for Christmas. A lot will be revealed within the next few chapters, but Harry's sort of just trying to deal with everything now, so he hasn't really got the chance to think.
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