Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter Two: Prophetic Dreams 12 Mar 2007 1:40 pm
Reviewer: Nalli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't stress engouh how much I loved the snape/harry interaction. Absolutely awesome. I also loved seeing how Harry dealt with it. Lots of fun to read.
Title: Chapter One: Harry's Dilemma 12 Mar 2007 1:35 pm
Reviewer: Nalli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pretty strong beginning - you seem to get more into your stride as you go along. It was good how you brought up past treatment of Harry; I imagine that will be very useful later in a father/son bonding or comparison of some sort - or you might do something else completely different and surprise us all! Whatever it is I can't wait.
Title: Chapter Thirteen: Exploding Snap 12 Mar 2007 1:26 pm
Reviewer: Nalli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've alreay read all fourteen chapters, and I only reviewed the last one, but I've decided I should go back and review you're other ones (or at least some). Miss June is right, you don't get enough reviews, and I'm really willing to take the time to encourage you to write more, because your writing and this story is worth it. I love the way we're kept hanging with regards to the Harry/Snape confrontation, and your characterisation of Snape is great. Your dialogue is fast paced and real, and the detail in the potion making scenes is fab. Really keep it up, and I hope this helps motivate!
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Her Boyfriend's Potter 03 Mar 2007 5:32 am
Reviewer: Nalli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I absolutely love it! Keep it up, I'm keen for more!!!
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Her Boyfriend's Potter 13 Jan 2007 10:51 am
Reviewer: miss june (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love this story, although you are kinda making Harry seem scatterbrained. Still it's good. Snape has stayed a bastard and i like that  he has only shown brief moments of being nice. I will try to comment on every  chapter from now on. You dont seem to get enough reviews. Just don't stop updating. I hate it when i get into a really good FF and idiots stop writing them! But you seem smart so i know you woulden' t do that to me. Would you?

Title: Chapter Fourteen: Her Boyfriend's Potter 07 Jan 2007 1:40 am
Reviewer: honore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You plan on adding more to this story?  Please say that you will because I'm in it knee deep now and don't wish to stop reading.  You are very talented and I have thoroughpy enjoyed what I have read thus far.  Thanks
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Her Boyfriend's Potter 28 Dec 2006 10:09 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh, this was great!  I LOL at the kitchen scene with all the bad food.  And then the shopping scene was so funny.  Harry played his part so well, too well, but I loved it!  I thought for sure Snape would be harder on him, but it was great all the same.

    It will an interesting holiday for them! 

    Great job, update soon!

Title: Chapter Fourteen: Her Boyfriend's Potter 28 Dec 2006 8:43 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying your story. I hope you continue to update.
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Her Boyfriend's Potter 27 Dec 2006 2:08 am
Reviewer: Geek (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've enjoyed this story.. but one thing sticks out like a sore thumb.. not once in 14 chapters has Harry asked about Snape being his father... surely he'd have demanded an explanation by now?

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's sort of waiting as it is, because I wanted to save the big confrontation for Christmas. A lot will be revealed within the next few chapters, but Harry's sort of just trying to deal with everything now, so he hasn't really got the chance to think. 
Title: Chapter Thirteen: Exploding Snap 18 Dec 2006 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant!  I LOL at the Potions' scene!

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