Wow, I can see this becoming a truly wonderful story… it’s unfortunate that it’s left unfinished because I really like how you write harry and Snape they truly feel true to canon.
Hopefully you consider continuing it
| Title: Chapter 5
| 06 Jun 2009 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Maryam (Anonymous)
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wow this is great especially snape taunting harry
i luv the parts when snape goaads and sneers at harry
when's the next chapter????
More? Soon? ASAP? I really can't wait for another chapter!
I am really hoping you will update soon!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 19 Apr 2008 8:49 am
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| Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous)
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Yay, yay, yay! I love your story! Please write lots more soon.
pleased upsate soon - you've got me really interested!
Great premise! So simple but there is so much potential for the Harry & Snape to have a war of words. At first I thought you were going to have one chapter for each detention and end the story on the last detention – a little window on what a week of detentions would be like with Snape. But now it looks like maybe you're going in a different direction? Either way, good job!
This story is very good, I like the cannon-ness of the characters, it makes it a good read. Please, please update the next chapter soon! I've gotten into the storey already in just the small amount of chapters you've posted. Very interesting and the comments are funny and some make you think.
This is brilliant! Snape has always been my favorite character and I love how you keep him true to the books with his horrible insults. I also liked the part where Harry sends the note to Sirius even though he's gone. Very sad. I look forward to reading more!
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