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Reviews For Solitary Confinement
Snape's got to be worried, but you'd never know it unless you looked very closely. Well done! misundersnape...
I hate cow/slaughter metaphors. It makes me feel so bad for eating steak :( I wonder what'll happen-if wormtail actually comes to Hogwarts and what is he going to tell Voldie that he found? A crazy old man locked Sev in a room?? I'm sure Voldie'll buy that...Can't wait to see what insane thing Snape will do next!! ~~Estie~~
Ahhh. cute idea. I love the fact that Harry and Snape are locked up together until further notice. It obviously shows that Snape is not as bad as Harry thinks or he would have left him in the dream and not given him dreamless sleep. Voldie was done fine no worries. In fact I was surprised he gave pettigrew a chance to kind of sort of redeem himself.
keep up the good work can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ I hope the next chapter is to your liking. Aah, but this is Voldemort we're dealing with!
Interesting development. If that's a correct French quote, then it must be slang. "Allez à l'enfer." would be the one - although a lot longer, and less impressive as a curse, I'll admit. And the second one "Aide-toi, le ciel t'aidera," literaly says: "Help yourself, heaven will help you." Just thought I'd point that out.
Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^ I blame Wikpedia lol. I speak not a word of French, so I didn't have so much as a clue. Apparently those are the literal translations but according to research, what I have written is the nearest English proverb ... apparently lol. Thanks for pointing that out!
Update! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Author's Response: Great to hear! I will as soon as I can! ^_^
Just wanted to say that I'm enjoying the story so far. Snape is still his snarky self, but you're showing us small pieces of his humanity. I liked it that he cared enough to make sure that his student had a somewhat decent place to sleep. And to see that he was a bit concerned about Harry's nightmare. Harry's character is pretty good, too. He seems a little off balance when it comes to understanding Snape, which is perfect. Without Ron there to give his opinion about Snape maybe Harry can make up his own mind....
Author's Response: Exactly! Finally, someone who knows hot to express me in comprehensible words lol. The hints could have been subtler, but I'm glad you're enjoying them ^_^ Thanks bunches for reveiwing!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Ugh, don't I know it lol. I hope to make up with for it in the next chapter. Too soft, too quickly, gotcha. I'll try to rectify it as best I can ^_^ Thanks very much for your commens :D (And the French comes into play later. I didn't put it there for the hell of it lol. But, sssh ;))
Author's Response: Fantastic to hear, thank you ^_^ All shall be revealed Author's Response: Fantastic to hear, thank you ^_^ All shall be revealed |
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