ok, I LOVE this chapter! Beautifully written. There are so many parts I love here, that I can't even think of where to begin. One thing though was definitely how Harry turned the name-game onto Sev. That was done perfectly!
I really liked this chapter :) don't know why, but i did. I love your style!
I love that Snape speaks French! It's so...sexy lol.
oh, and favorite line ever: "At one time or another I always want to kill someone"--So Sev
Wikpedia definitely rocks.
I hate cow/slaughter metaphors. It makes me feel so bad for eating steak :(
I wonder what'll happen-if wormtail actually comes to Hogwarts and what is he going to tell Voldie that he found? A crazy old man locked Sev in a room?? I'm sure Voldie'll buy that...Can't wait to see what insane thing Snape will do next!!
~~Estie~~
Short and sweet :) Just the way I like it. I could totally imagine being stuck in there, with absolute quiet and then.. Drip. Drop. Drip. haha, I would go insane!!!
I like the door being his friend. That is cute.
HA! Harry better watch out... >.>
I love this idea sooo much! Can't wait to read the rest.
| Title: Three For Fighting
| 03 May 2008 2:09 am
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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I loved Dobby's clothes,and the rest of the chapter was very well written too.
| Title: Initial Inferno
| 03 May 2008 1:57 am
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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Oh I just loved this first chapter,I am going to read the rest as I finish this,I really like the thought of Harry and Snape being locked up till they settle their problems.
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