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Title: Chapter 5 02 Aug 2006 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so cute!  I love Sev taking care of a 2year old Harry.  Nice to see Draco being helpful as well.  Hope you can update this soon!  I want Sev to get Harry back!!!
Title: Chapter 5 14 Jul 2006 9:23 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwwww, they got him... Thats bad... Now, please, please, write SOON! I'll want to know what will happen. whom will be first one going to crazy with the situation, or how whose all. Update ASAP!
Title: Chapter 5 13 Jul 2006 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Jack The Ripper (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter
Title: Chapter 4 28 Jun 2006 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chappy! I'll love seeing how Snape will take prolonged screaming. Or how long it takes until he gets there and try to help him to sleep. Please update soon!
Title: Chapter 3 11 Jun 2006 12:19 am
Reviewer: Fan_Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great, hoping for another chapter!!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Jun 2006 12:53 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I love this. I love the differences in Snape from one scene to the next. I'm enjoying this thoroughly...  Kyleigh
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jun 2006 5:17 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Harry makes such a cute little toddler and it's sweet how Draco is helping out too.
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jun 2006 10:34 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]

    If you are reworking this, could you work to keep the tense the same throughout the story?  It is very confusing moving between past and present tenses.  For example:

    Only one other person in the school really believed his silence to be more than his mourning, and that would be Professor Severus Snape. Though he hates Potter, he was able to see the signs of much more.

    You begin in past tense "believed", move to present tense "hates", and back to past "was able to see."


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