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Reviews For Poison
Regarding the damage caused by the poison: kidney damage would be much more likely than lung damage for a poison taken internally. (sorry, working in the medical field that just sort of jumped out at me.) aside from that, overall a good story.
Nice, I like the it, until the part of Snape wanting revenge over the Dursley... (that`s more what Remus`d feel like) Even if his misconceptions were wrong, he shoudn`t jump from hating Harry to care for him enough to want revenge.... Even so I found the story very creative, =) Keep writting |
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