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Reviews For Poison
Title: Chapter 1 05 Jun 2009 12:22 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Snape sending off a spell at the intruder was good. Something he would have been likely to do. Though I'm surprised he missed!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jun 2008 1:22 am
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Minor spelling errors, chiefly hononym and typographical errors.

    Regarding the damage caused by the poison: kidney damage would be much more likely than lung damage for a poison taken internally. (sorry, working in the medical field that just sort of jumped out at me.)

    aside from that, overall a good story.
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jul 2006 5:11 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed it.  Can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jul 2006 2:09 pm
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a wonderful story! I can't wait for the next update! Please hurry!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jul 2006 10:14 am
Reviewer: veritaserum (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm....great story! I definitely think that this could become a chaptered fic, instead of a one-shot. But then again, I don't what your plans are regarding this story! I loved the twist of how both Harry and Hedwig were poisoned. I thought it was very creative. It was a great story, and you did a wonderful job writing it. Thanks for writing! And hopefully I'll see an update!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jul 2006 1:15 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it! Good job!
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jul 2006 2:59 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Methinks this needs continued!
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jul 2006 2:22 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Good one.  Could see more to it, maybe give Snape more of a reason for his quick switch.  Overall, enjoyable
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jul 2006 2:22 am
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Good one.  Could see more to it, maybe give Snape more of a reason for his quick switch.  Overall, enjoyable
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jul 2006 12:15 am
Reviewer: Lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Nice, I like the it, until the part of Snape wanting revenge over the Dursley... (that`s more what Remus`d feel like) Even if his misconceptions were wrong, he shoudn`t jump from hating Harry to care for him enough to want revenge....

    Even so I found the story very creative, =)

    Keep writting


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