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Reviews For Poison
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2006 8:08 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice twist at the end.  Somehow, though, Snape's desire for revenge is not supported enough in the confines of the story.  I know you were trying to be brief, but it would have had a more believable punch with a little more chance for Snape to develope that strong a reaction, IMHO.

    Author's Response: I hand't even noticed that one. As you said, I tried to be brief, ad then that's what happens! i always seem to miss something when I write brief (and quickly). Thanks anyway!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2006 7:24 pm
Reviewer: ANN (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Nice beginning of a story.  Please continue.

     


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