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Reviews For Under Lock and Key
Title: Tricked! 16 Sep 2009 2:39 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I think it's the start to a good story, but when you write you sometimes write in present tense, and sometimes in past tense. It gets a bit annoying.
Title: Tricked! 02 May 2009 6:24 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a good start to this story. I like how you have both Snape and Harry trying to open the door only to fail and be told by Dumbledore that it cannot be done. However I noticed a fair amount of errors in your tenses, you tend to shift from past to present tense in some of your paragraphs and it's a little awkward.
Title: Tricked! 03 Aug 2006 11:54 pm
Reviewer: aguila (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I really like your take on the challenge. Please update the next chapter soon.

Title: Tricked! 28 Jul 2006 8:01 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oooh, nice start.  Keep it up please.  I've found that I like this challenge, and the different responces to it.  So please do finish this.

     

    SHEla WOLFsbane

Title: Tricked! 28 Jul 2006 2:04 am
Reviewer: Kelsey! (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it so far, update soon!
Title: Tricked! 28 Jul 2006 12:45 am
Reviewer: seri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, will you be continuing this?
Title: Tricked! 27 Jul 2006 7:46 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe. I like how you started this. Really funny.
Title: Tricked! 25 Jul 2006 1:28 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think you have a great beginning and I really want to know what's in the trunk? Looking forward to your next chapter.
Title: Tricked! 24 Jul 2006 5:33 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooooh yay! I love fics like this! I cant wait until you update.
Title: Tricked! 24 Jul 2006 3:42 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha ha ha! I love this idea for a story. I'm glad you're answering the challenge too. Your chapter was quite good, although it seems as though you have some present tense verbs hiding out in there. The trunk of goodies leaves me intrigued... I can't wait for an update.

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