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Reviews For Under Lock and Key
Title: Tricked! 28 Jul 2006 12:45 am
Reviewer: seri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, will you be continuing this?
Title: Tricked! 27 Jul 2006 7:46 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe. I like how you started this. Really funny.
Title: Tricked! 25 Jul 2006 1:28 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think you have a great beginning and I really want to know what's in the trunk? Looking forward to your next chapter.
Title: Tricked! 24 Jul 2006 5:33 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooooh yay! I love fics like this! I cant wait until you update.
Title: Tricked! 24 Jul 2006 3:42 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha ha ha! I love this idea for a story. I'm glad you're answering the challenge too. Your chapter was quite good, although it seems as though you have some present tense verbs hiding out in there. The trunk of goodies leaves me intrigued... I can't wait for an update.
Title: Tricked! 24 Jul 2006 2:28 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice beginning.  I will enjoy this, but would really appreciate it if you would keep all your sentences in the same tense.  Several have the present tense just appear and it is very disconcerting.  Another pet peeve is the "relishing in" phrase.  I believe the word "in" is not necessary in that sentence.

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